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Words ... Sometimes
They fall,
sometimes
slow,
sometimes
twisting,
even go
unheard,
forgotten,
never
thought
about,
sometimes
lingering,
cutting,
into flesh
ripping
into bone,
sometimes
covered,
with warm
salty tears,
sometimes
hidden,
behind
fear and
pain,
sometimes
felt,
loved,
whispered
into souls,
sometimes
believable,
truthful,
with meaning.
sometimes
slow,
sometimes
twisting,
even go
unheard,
forgotten,
never
thought
about,
sometimes
lingering,
cutting,
into flesh
ripping
into bone,
sometimes
covered,
with warm
salty tears,
sometimes
hidden,
behind
fear and
pain,
sometimes
felt,
loved,
whispered
into souls,
sometimes
believable,
truthful,
with meaning.
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Re: Words ... Sometimes
17th Nov 2013 6:24pm
Yea, I agree in totality the truth of your words
Sometimes... That's exactly how it feels...outstanding my dear! :)
Sometimes... That's exactly how it feels...outstanding my dear! :)
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re: Re: Words ... Sometimes
17th Nov 2013 9:58pm
Re: Words ... Sometimes
17th Nov 2013 9:28pm
re: Re: Words ... Sometimes
17th Nov 2013 9:59pm
Re: Words ... Sometimes
17th Nov 2013 9:48pm
I have not the words to describe the power of words :) You've done a great job doing so. WSell done , Tommie!
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re: Re: Words ... Sometimes
17th Nov 2013 10:00pm
Re: Words ... Sometimes
18th Nov 2013 4:35am
that's right .. words are very powerful.
you explored it well , the whole idea..talking about sorrow , fear , anger ,love etc I dont know if u have missed anything..
nicely written..
keep writing
cyanide...
you explored it well , the whole idea..talking about sorrow , fear , anger ,love etc I dont know if u have missed anything..
nicely written..
keep writing
cyanide...
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re: Re: Words ... Sometimes
18th Nov 2013 1:44pm
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re: Re: Words ... Sometimes
18th Nov 2013 1:45pm
Re: Words ... Sometimes
Anonymous
18th Nov 2013 4:07pm
Tommie Lynn,
Yes! Those words, that's them! ; ) Enjoyed!!!
tornado
Yes! Those words, that's them! ; ) Enjoyed!!!
tornado
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