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Emerge...
Oh naked woman, reveal yourself to thee
Break free, your chains of modesty
Thy creator made you beautiful
The best part of my dichotomy
I gasp as your beauty entrances me
I gasp as your beauty entrances me
The best part of my dichotomy
Thy creator made you beautiful
Break free, your chains of modesty
Oh naked woman, reveal yourself to thee
Oh naked woman,
Lay bare your heart, freed of control
Thy creator made you beautiful,
Yet cojoined within each others soul
Hence again, I am thus made whole...
Break free, your chains of modesty
Thy creator made you beautiful
The best part of my dichotomy
I gasp as your beauty entrances me
I gasp as your beauty entrances me
The best part of my dichotomy
Thy creator made you beautiful
Break free, your chains of modesty
Oh naked woman, reveal yourself to thee
Oh naked woman,
Lay bare your heart, freed of control
Thy creator made you beautiful,
Yet cojoined within each others soul
Hence again, I am thus made whole...
Published 17th Nov 2013
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17th Nov 2013 3:19pm
yeah nice creativity...great wordplay poet .. awesome write...repeating the same words/lines in every stanza giving out different meaning with same colours shows the different texture of your lovely pen... loved it buddy... keep up the good work ...
keep Rollin
cyanide....
keep Rollin
cyanide....
Yea, the repetition is because it is 'loosely'
a based on a form of poetry called, "Rotourne" (sp?)
but becuz I so often take grand liberties with poetry
I can't call it 'correct' form lol thanks a ton bro. Truly appreciate you! :)
a based on a form of poetry called, "Rotourne" (sp?)
but becuz I so often take grand liberties with poetry
I can't call it 'correct' form lol thanks a ton bro. Truly appreciate you! :)
17th Nov 2013 4:22pm
this is so beautiful.. I too like the repetition almost like a mantra to the lovely one you're speaking to each stanza revealing a different layer of love for this woman.. tender write.. much love Crim :)
17th Nov 2013 4:48pm
Thank you, guess I'm just a bowl of jello Afterall huh? lol
Appreciate you sweetness :)
Appreciate you sweetness :)
17th Nov 2013 6:16pm
A touching piece my friend. You are poet the whole world will soon know. Your creativity is amazing, so do keep amazing us all.
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18th Nov 2013 7:49pm
Oh by all means, PLEASE do!!! lol
Damn, I love this comment lol... Thank u my sweetness
Appreciate you much :)
Damn, I love this comment lol... Thank u my sweetness
Appreciate you much :)
19th Nov 2013 6:46pm
I agree with Scarlet! Breaking free of the chains of modesty can be hard but you rhythmically make it almost trance like! Thanks
19th Nov 2013 8:42pm
20th Nov 2013 1:11am
Love this! Truly a beautiful write. What a shame more women cannot see themselves through others eyes, and free themselves.
20th Nov 2013 1:20am
Aaaawww thank you! N yea I agree with you 100 n sincery am grateful for ur thoughts :)
