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GITTITY UP NOW
She grinds her used cunt; full upon face, tongue licks in its element; striving for taste. Cum loving tricks; eating where other men plow, hurry my cucky; gittity up now. Having a cum sucking fetish; in our sexual play, we weren't very happy; there was no other way. She had my head spinning; there was never a doubt, it turned her on greatly; when men turned me out. It started with a cum kiss; ushering passionate fire, leading to consumption; after mounted desire. Now I watch the fuck lust; as he donates a big load, her pleasure is mine; as his cum overflows. I lick up my dinner; she hears my pleased sigh, she loves how I linger; over her sexy creampies.
Published 17th Nov 2013
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I consider you the Shakespeare of erotic poetry. Your words are like that of Shakespeare given the full lust of words that stimulates you whole.
18th Nov 2013 10:14am
Thank you ElBaby; I don't know what to say, to your comments I look forward; each and every day. Some would consider profane; amoral; a tease; I'm simply a fella; who feels at ease. Self-esteem issues; subservient lean, labels given with judgement; by what society deems. What makes a man; how are they seen, by this one rule I live; never demean. It seems simple; kindness and respect for us all; what perfect world; if we would follow this call.
19th Nov 2013 6:42am
Well my friend change for no one be you, for your style is great and it's always a pleasure to read your work. And your right what a perfect world it we be if we did show kindness and respect to one another daily. Have many safe & blessed days my friend look forward to your next piece.
