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Missing The Light
The room is silent
no noise to defy it
my heart beat quickens
and my breath mimics
darkness overtakes my sight
I soon miss the light
I scream in pure fright
my light has turned
into a never ending night
no noise to defy it
my heart beat quickens
and my breath mimics
darkness overtakes my sight
I soon miss the light
I scream in pure fright
my light has turned
into a never ending night
Published 27th Jan 2011
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27th Jan 2011 8:59am
in such shortness of this poem... you definately didn't fail in putting in heaps of detail in your beautiful lines...
it screams honesty.. it screams frightened emotions.. it screams brilliance. keep it up yeah :)
it screams honesty.. it screams frightened emotions.. it screams brilliance. keep it up yeah :)
27th Jan 2011 4:19pm
27th Jan 2011 8:52pm
