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The Best Feeling In The World
That moment I hear their voice
In the morning when their eyes are barely open
When they say good morning momma
I can feel that love fill my heart <3
That's the best feeling in the world
In the morning when their eyes are barely open
When they say good morning momma
I can feel that love fill my heart <3
That's the best feeling in the world
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Re: The Best Feeling In The World
17th Nov 2013 3:21am
There are no others on earth as great as your kids :-) this made me smile...
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17th Nov 2013 3:29am
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Tommie this is beautiful! A child's love is pure and unconditional...the best kind. By your words I can tell you're an excellent momma :)
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17th Nov 2013 5:58pm
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17th Nov 2013 4:45am
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17th Nov 2013 5:58pm
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17th Nov 2013 8:33am
Oh yes :). And little arms hugging as they stare into your eyes. Lovely. I am heartwarmed by this. Thank you. Perfect for Sunday morns Syn
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17th Nov 2013 6:00pm
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17th Nov 2013 1:55pm
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17th Nov 2013 6:00pm
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I'll be honest I've read a lot of 4/5 lines poem some of em are excellent.. but this by far is the best I have come across...I could feel your children's delicate eyes in this line -
' In the morning when their eyes are barely open'..ohhhh wow..
... you remind me of my childhood days... oh mamma I love you!!
keep rolling lil mamma
cyanide...
' In the morning when their eyes are barely open'..ohhhh wow..
... you remind me of my childhood days... oh mamma I love you!!
keep rolling lil mamma
cyanide...
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re: Re: The Best Feeling In The World
17th Nov 2013 8:29pm
Your comment is touching!Thank you SO very much!
No matter what, without fail they always tell me good
morning, they are my everything! I appreciate you
reading and your wonderful comment.
No matter what, without fail they always tell me good
morning, they are my everything! I appreciate you
reading and your wonderful comment.
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18th Nov 2013 5:22am
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18th Nov 2013 1:43pm
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Anonymous
19th Nov 2013 8:14pm
What an amazing feeling, someday I'll feel that too. This poem is simple and uplifting, well done :)
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20th Nov 2013 4:09am
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Anonymous
20th Nov 2013 4:15am
This is precious! I miss these days as mine are 28 and 29. LOL!!!! Treasure these times while you got them, specially since their toys are still at a affordable price. Enjoyed this! :)
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re: Re: The Best Feeling In The World
20th Nov 2013 6:07pm
Mine are older too, my youngest is 13,but no matter where they are they always tell me good morning and good night ;)
Thanks for reading.
Thanks for reading.
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21st Nov 2013 10:54pm
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