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Love Exits
Her heart breaks apart
into tiny splinters of
emptiness from pain
Where pulsing crimson
once flowed she sees him
in a different light
He has destroyed her
soul and ruined her heart
slowly her curtain is drawn
into tiny splinters of
emptiness from pain
Where pulsing crimson
once flowed she sees him
in a different light
He has destroyed her
soul and ruined her heart
slowly her curtain is drawn
Published 30th Oct 2013
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30th Oct 2013 1:42pm
Lets add an 'S' to the title and change the whole meaning here, miss. It exists. (Really)
30th Oct 2013 1:45pm
30th Oct 2013 1:54pm
30th Oct 2013 7:51pm
30th Oct 2013 5:22pm
Love the metaphors you used... Definitely a relatable piece. Great work!:)
30th Oct 2013 7:52pm
30th Oct 2013 9:16pm
It's no wonder that true love is so hard to find. Particularly when ones heart, in the past, was crushed. Take firm hold of your curtain cord and keep it open to love.
31st Oct 2013 1:16am
Some hearts get ripped out, chewed up,shredded ...it's part of life sometimes! Thank you GW... ;)
31st Oct 2013 3:30am
2nd Nov 2013 6:19pm
I feel like everyone some way or another has felt this before...well said and very nice imagery...
12th Dec 2013 4:01pm
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11th Nov 2013 2:14am
It does! sometimes it just does, no explaining it. just deal with it, right? damn sad! but so damn true :/ Nice scribe Poet :)
~Tom
~Tom
12th Dec 2013 4:03pm
17th Nov 2013 1:58am
the end of 1 chapter, but hopefully the beginning of a bright new adventure. I feel those teardrops...
12th Dec 2013 4:03pm
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12th Dec 2013 7:43am
Even little chips taken will add to the demise. Time creates of destroys all. A new life waits Tommie. Thank again Doll..
12th Dec 2013 4:06pm
