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"FATED"
"Though I walk through the valley
Cast, the shadows of death
I fear, I know evil has expelled another breath..."
South Central L.A...
Vine & Crenshaw two lil children
two hours ago at play...
the streets vomited violence
now shattered in crimson
bullet splattered they lay...
New hope, in Cape Hope
South Africa
the natives need a light
ships returning with bounties
opulence a delight
Yet, nature slapped a cruel
hand at fate, a crew of thirty
Loss killed Hope's spark
Now the bright of day appears
completely dark...
New chapter, honeymoon bound
Cabo San Lucas, México
una muy bonita escapada
A week of pleasure
newly wedded couple
weighted with such promise
though the reaper's 'onus' is
Simply, "da nada"
Central Park, New York
night joggers no longer victim
decades have washed clean
the methods of how the criminal
elements have picked them
But it is of no consolation to Joe
his drops dead by an act of God
damn...lightening struck his heart
wouldn't you know? So healthy
so young, still it was his time to go...
"And though I walk thru the valley
and shadows of death, I shall fear no
evil, even with my last breath..."
Cast, the shadows of death
I fear, I know evil has expelled another breath..."
South Central L.A...
Vine & Crenshaw two lil children
two hours ago at play...
the streets vomited violence
now shattered in crimson
bullet splattered they lay...
New hope, in Cape Hope
South Africa
the natives need a light
ships returning with bounties
opulence a delight
Yet, nature slapped a cruel
hand at fate, a crew of thirty
Loss killed Hope's spark
Now the bright of day appears
completely dark...
New chapter, honeymoon bound
Cabo San Lucas, México
una muy bonita escapada
A week of pleasure
newly wedded couple
weighted with such promise
though the reaper's 'onus' is
Simply, "da nada"
Central Park, New York
night joggers no longer victim
decades have washed clean
the methods of how the criminal
elements have picked them
But it is of no consolation to Joe
his drops dead by an act of God
damn...lightening struck his heart
wouldn't you know? So healthy
so young, still it was his time to go...
"And though I walk thru the valley
and shadows of death, I shall fear no
evil, even with my last breath..."
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Re: "FATED"
Anonymous
13th Nov 2013 6:15pm
when its your time to go..its your time?
good thing I believe its just the flesh and bone carriage for the soul..take it Reaper..I'll find a new one..stronger, prettier..lol
Nice ink brother Poe
good thing I believe its just the flesh and bone carriage for the soul..take it Reaper..I'll find a new one..stronger, prettier..lol
Nice ink brother Poe
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re: Re: "FATED"
13th Nov 2013 7:52pm
So true bro! You def. Know tv at a right! lol
Thank you so much, as always I'm grateful for all your support
Thank you so much, as always I'm grateful for all your support
Re: "FATED"
13th Nov 2013 8:08pm
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13th Nov 2013 8:17pm
I hear you bro. Me neither, but it's life right? Thanks a ton
I truly appreciate you n your support always :)
I truly appreciate you n your support always :)
Re: "FATED"
13th Nov 2013 8:20pm
This message is ingenious Poe! Damn, you left me speechless with this ink! Powerful read! Xo
Pen Salute~
Pen Salute~
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re: Re: "FATED"
13th Nov 2013 8:30pm
Thank you my dear, I'm flattered by your reaction n I'm grateful as always for your continued support :)
Re: "FATED"
Anonymous
13th Nov 2013 8:53pm
I hate to watch the news, but the way you report it is so captivating. :)
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14th Nov 2013 4:51am
Aaaawwww sweetie I know how you feel, but if it makes you feel better these snippets weren't anything g I saw/ on the news, just my imagination n knowing things like this does have the chance of occurring! :) appreciate ur support so much :)
Re: "FATED"
13th Nov 2013 10:48pm
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14th Nov 2013 4:54am
Thank you my lovely lady, you're always making me feel giddy with ur sweetness... :) appreciate you
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14th Nov 2013 2:07am
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14th Nov 2013 4:56am
There goes my bay bay lol hi there, been missing the past few days :) thanks a bunch n always I am grateful for ur support :)
Re: "FATED"
Anonymous
15th Nov 2013 3:21am
Sometimes being oblivious is a bliss, the world can be such a cruel place.
Nicely penned PIKM, you painted a vivid description.
Nicely penned PIKM, you painted a vivid description.
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re: Re: "FATED"
15th Nov 2013 7:56pm
Totally agree with you lady, I'm of a mind that
at times ignorance is bliss... like NOT knowing my exact moment of death... lol thank u my dear lady
Appreciate you much :)
at times ignorance is bliss... like NOT knowing my exact moment of death... lol thank u my dear lady
Appreciate you much :)
Re: "FATED"
15th Nov 2013 5:38pm
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15th Nov 2013 8:36pm
Yes in many cases it is... This particular set of Mimi stories are purely from my imagination though... Truly grateful for your time n thoughts :)
Re: "FATED"
16th Nov 2013 1:27am
love the simple sentences that are so strong and say so much..very cool:)
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re: Re: "FATED"
16th Nov 2013 4:06am
Wow, this is a big surprise! I thought you forgot about me lol
Happy to see I was wrong, nice hearing from you again too my friend... Thank you so much :)
Happy to see I was wrong, nice hearing from you again too my friend... Thank you so much :)
Re: "FATED"
16th Nov 2013 5:34am
Yes we all are fated to pass though this valley so much tragedy in you poem but so reassuring that though you pass through the shadow of death you shall fear no evil.. beautiful.. peace Crim :)
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Re: "FATED"
19th Nov 2013 7:42pm
wonderfully intertwined and thought provoking ! really enjoyed this write P.:)
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19th Nov 2013 8:46pm
Thank you my sweet friend! I was wondering where u been? Good to hear from u again :)