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Re: Haiku - Tales
11th Nov 2013 8:38am
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11th Nov 2013 10:17am
I very much appreciate you stopping by
and reading my haiku! Thank you!
Glad you like it!
and reading my haiku! Thank you!
Glad you like it!
Re: Haiku - Tales
11th Nov 2013 8:41am
wonderful scene: trees extending their branches toward heaven, I wonder if they are praying...
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re: Re: Haiku - Tales
11th Nov 2013 10:18am
Thanks John for bringing up
the lovely image
of preaching branches.
That's beautiful! Thank you!
the lovely image
of preaching branches.
That's beautiful! Thank you!
Re: Haiku - Tales
11th Nov 2013 11:34am
that's beautiful, it
expresses what it
wishes to express
exactly,
which is poetry, I
guess...
but yours always
is :)
expresses what it
wishes to express
exactly,
which is poetry, I
guess...
but yours always
is :)
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Re: Haiku - Tales
11th Nov 2013 12:35pm
So humbled by your
absolutely flattering comment, Paul.
Thank you so much!
I'd like to state
that - to me - your poems
are brilliant examples
of which poetry is.
absolutely flattering comment, Paul.
Thank you so much!
I'd like to state
that - to me - your poems
are brilliant examples
of which poetry is.
Re: Haiku - Tales
11th Nov 2013 1:37pm
"Wooden tales of transient times" seems to have so much resonance!
A joy to read
A joy to read
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re: Re: Haiku - Tales
11th Nov 2013 6:17pm
Thank you so much JAZZMANOR for your kinde response! Glad you like the tales :-).
Re: Haiku - Tales
Anonymous
11th Nov 2013 2:26pm
Simply beautiful Miss Chi..such honesty in just the first 8 words..these are not fairy tales but tales of seasons come and gone for years. Lovely! and to tie it up the last line may suggest the prayers for many more seasons to come....Resoundingly beautiful scribe meine Freundin !
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re: Re: Haiku - Tales
11th Nov 2013 6:20pm
Tom, mein Freund, I'm so glad you like this seasonal ink :-). When I picked the last apples from our apple tree it sighed and swayed in the wind and I swear ... it told me tales of long gone times ...
Re: Haiku - Tales
11th Nov 2013 3:35pm
Vivid! I remember I wrote a piece about tree
branches n this remined it of it nice ink :)
branches n this remined it of it nice ink :)
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re: Re: Haiku - Tales
Thank you Poe, I'm thrilled you like it! Have to look up your tree branches poem! It's surely nice, too :-).
Re: Haiku - Tales
11th Nov 2013 6:05pm
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I like it simple and when it appears beautiful,too, Im very happy! Thank you Sarah!
Re: Haiku - Tales
Anonymous
11th Nov 2013 7:12pm
Miss Chi,
In stripping away the cover you have shown us the beauty within! Enjoyed!
tornado
In stripping away the cover you have shown us the beauty within! Enjoyed!
tornado
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re: Re: Haiku - Tales
You make me happy with your kind words, my friend! I appreciate your stripping thoughts a lot :-). Thank you!
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12th Nov 2013 2:05am
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re: Re: Haiku - Tales
Perhaps we should carry on
with the "branch tales" :-)?
That's a lovely tale you created!
Thank you lonelyvoyager!
I'm thinking of more now ...
with the "branch tales" :-)?
That's a lovely tale you created!
Thank you lonelyvoyager!
I'm thinking of more now ...
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12th Nov 2013 8:15am
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12th Nov 2013 2:07pm
Re: Haiku - Tales
Anonymous
12th Nov 2013 8:36am
A wonderful still life of winter to come, much enjoyed!!!
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re: Re: Haiku - Tales
12th Nov 2013 2:04pm
As winter is the
stillest season of the year
the poem seemed
just appropriate for it.
Thank you so much, dear Liz!
stillest season of the year
the poem seemed
just appropriate for it.
Thank you so much, dear Liz!
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14th Nov 2013 8:16pm
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20th Nov 2013 3:19pm
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