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Rainy Day Coffee
Mmmm...that smell, coffee.
Hot cup warming my hands,
raindrops covering the windows
rolling down like tiny streams.
Sitting in our favorite booth,
just right for two
holding hands across the table
laughing at our dreams.
Eggs and bacon for you
oatmeal with raisins for me.
"Another cup of coffee please"
"and yes, milk not cream".
Raincoats, umbrellas and puddles
no better way to pass a rainy day.
You, me and coffee.
Mmmm...now that's a winning team.
Mom and Dad(rest their souls)...one of their favorite things to do on a rainy day, people watching at the local diner :)
Hot cup warming my hands,
raindrops covering the windows
rolling down like tiny streams.
Sitting in our favorite booth,
just right for two
holding hands across the table
laughing at our dreams.
Eggs and bacon for you
oatmeal with raisins for me.
"Another cup of coffee please"
"and yes, milk not cream".
Raincoats, umbrellas and puddles
no better way to pass a rainy day.
You, me and coffee.
Mmmm...now that's a winning team.
Mom and Dad(rest their souls)...one of their favorite things to do on a rainy day, people watching at the local diner :)
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Re: Rainy Day Coffee
10th Nov 2013 3:23pm
Such a heartfelt memory of your Dad and Mom together just enjoying a cup of coffee and watching people.. beautiful.. peace Crim
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10th Nov 2013 8:22pm
Re: Rainy Day Coffee
10th Nov 2013 3:26pm
In many ways this imagery touches me, I wish someday I have someone to share coffee like that. Good read Hashman.
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10th Nov 2013 8:33pm
Re: Rainy Day Coffee
10th Nov 2013 3:48pm
What a lovely piece, my Friend!
Your vivid imagery truly paints the perfect portrait for the readers....that special moment, and the love, shared by your Mom and Dad.
You make my soul smile with this poem!
A Tender Tribute!
Your vivid imagery truly paints the perfect portrait for the readers....that special moment, and the love, shared by your Mom and Dad.
You make my soul smile with this poem!
A Tender Tribute!
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re: Re: Rainy Day Coffee
10th Nov 2013 8:34pm
Re: Rainy Day Coffee
lovely
can picture the café
raining outside
not a care in the world
wonderful tribute
can picture the café
raining outside
not a care in the world
wonderful tribute
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re: Re: Rainy Day Coffee
10th Nov 2013 8:36pm
Re: Rainy Day Coffee
10th Nov 2013 5:07pm
Beautiful imagery and touching emotions here Hash-sigh worthy Sir!!!
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10th Nov 2013 8:37pm
Re: Rainy Day Coffee
10th Nov 2013 5:48pm
I swear to goodness this could be the script in a commercial...word for word and image for image! You've got something warm and real that others don't have Hash :-) Sick one...
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re: Re: Rainy Day Coffee
10th Nov 2013 8:40pm
Thank you very much Sir Zacc and I think you are right...great commercial (peace to you)
Re: Rainy Day Coffee
10th Nov 2013 8:33pm
Yea... A tender 'snapshot' you painted here so vividly bro!
I felt like a fly on the wall with this one :)
I felt like a fly on the wall with this one :)
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re: Re: Rainy Day Coffee
10th Nov 2013 8:45pm
Yes,thank you my brother...hope they don't a flyswatter around (peace always).
Re: Rainy Day Coffee
11th Nov 2013 00:01am
this is a picturesque reminiscence from small town America or anywhere. yes the coffee smells great...
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11th Nov 2013 11:13pm
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Anonymous
11th Nov 2013 00:18am
You painted a wonderful picture with your words
Thank you for a good read
Kitty
Thank you for a good read
Kitty
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re: Re: Rainy Day Coffee
11th Nov 2013 11:22pm
Re: Rainy Day Coffee
11th Nov 2013 1:52am
Hash, you've once again
written a poem that is
real and beautiful and
yet you always do..:)
written a poem that is
real and beautiful and
yet you always do..:)
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11th Nov 2013 11:26pm
Re: Rainy Day Coffee
11th Nov 2013 4:08am
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11th Nov 2013 11:28pm
Re: Rainy Day Coffee
Ah, that's a snug and
cozy write, Hashman.
Makes the cold and rainy days
much more endurable!
cozy write, Hashman.
Makes the cold and rainy days
much more endurable!
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11th Nov 2013 11:29pm
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Anonymous
15th Nov 2013 3:47am
So beautiful, nothing more pleasing on a rainy day to share a cupa coffee with a loved one. Very lovely Mr. Hash :)
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17th Nov 2013 2:04pm
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27th Nov 2013 2:16am
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