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Love St.
Bewildered and befuddled...
cruising down the highway
everything so smooth
then from nowhere
in the middle of the road
a bump and a dip
tossed around
up and down
bruised and shattered
will I ever know,
got to let it go.
cruising down the highway
everything so smooth
then from nowhere
in the middle of the road
a bump and a dip
tossed around
up and down
bruised and shattered
will I ever know,
got to let it go.
Published 17th Nov 2013
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A wonderful metaphoric write, Hashman.
Love isn't always a smoothe lane, some bumps
may just intensify the ride ...
Love isn't always a smoothe lane, some bumps
may just intensify the ride ...
17th Nov 2013 9:43pm
Nothing like a little pain to bring pleasure ;)...thank you Miss Chi,love saying that Miss Chi(ha)...so many different thoughts it brings to me.Mysterious,studious,love,danger and more.(sorry,must be the incense) :)
Quoi? That Miss Chi(ha) (your special Miss Chi? Not me for sure!) brings you yo many wonderful thoughts? Must be she (Chi) and not the inscense :-)! Haha Ha...sh!
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17th Nov 2013 11:48pm
that's a really good
read, Hash...perhaps
let her have the
driving seat for
a while..:)
read, Hash...perhaps
let her have the
driving seat for
a while..:)
18th Nov 2013 1:10am
Anonymous
18th Nov 2013 2:52pm
You have spoken for so many of us
Even when the sign says "leave"
We persist
Wonderfully penned
Kitty
Even when the sign says "leave"
We persist
Wonderfully penned
Kitty
19th Nov 2013 00:34am
