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It's Cold In Here
Why wasn't love enough
if it makes the world go round
why wasn't it enough?
You want me to believe in the grander scheme
but I see it for what it is
a feeling
like hate,
one that can and will fade with time
tick, tick, tick,
its almost over,
or is it?
if it makes the world go round
why wasn't it enough?
You want me to believe in the grander scheme
but I see it for what it is
a feeling
like hate,
one that can and will fade with time
tick, tick, tick,
its almost over,
or is it?
Published 9th Nov 2013
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9th Nov 2013 8:04pm
I don't know that the love, hate relationship ever ends.. I feel you on this write I love the ending where you say tick, tick, tick it's almost over, or is it? I wish my feelings would die a natural death and leave me alone.. great inking.. peace Crim
9th Nov 2013 9:23pm
I've asked that question so many f__king times..."why wasn't love enough?"...apparently it never is...nothing is ever enough...sick write Nikk :-)
9th Nov 2013 9:33pm
9th Nov 2013 11:11pm
...seems most people are greedy...whatever is given is never enough after the first bite...satisfactions they are elusive among many...I adopted minimalist living years ago...still didn't help, others still find things to take.
Excellent pondering Nikki!!!
Excellent pondering Nikki!!!
9th Nov 2013 11:55pm
....I was asked recently if I was in love...after being with the same person for a really long time..I can honestly say, that i am not even sure what that means...if we just loved the idea of love..or if we really felt it....needless to say, whatever it was we were doing, it wasn't working...and we are parting ways...so,whatever that "LOVE" is, I hope to find it someday...and probably for the first time...I know it exists because other people experience it. I hope you find it too!!! oxoxo
10th Nov 2013 1:19am
In this world we have
Freewill that means love
Or evil both are energies
That radiate time and motion
Cause & effect~SUN£IT€
Good ink !
Freewill that means love
Or evil both are energies
That radiate time and motion
Cause & effect~SUN£IT€
Good ink !
10th Nov 2013 1:22am
10th Nov 2013 3:44am
10th Nov 2013 1:53pm
dear nikkimoe......
write mo', nikkimoe------
iloveyou/////(for all thee 'good' that does ye//)
10th Nov 2013 7:55pm
It appears you know where the wound starts and the course it takes to the brain where it registers the pain. I guess I'm not the only one that has struck the same questions.
Great thought poking... pointy stick.
Great thought poking... pointy stick.
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