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Wretched
Do you ever
feel you're so
broken, beyond repair?
I do I feel I've
scarred my soul
leaving behind nothing
just ash blowing
in the wind
for the carrion to pick at
my azure skies once so bright
now a bloody crimson
I've let the vultures
feast off my demise
while i'm still walking
too strong willed to lay down
give in, I press on
half dead
with the partial truths
I tell myself
lingering in the shadows
lest the sun scorch
my wretched being
demon's licking at my insides
screaming feed me more Crimsin
hide Brenda away don't let her speak
no not a word, stitch her mouth closed
cos she would call to the heavens
for deliverance from
her ghastly existence
beaten, broken
I still take flight
with my tarnished wings
my fate not sealed I shall be released!!!
feel you're so
broken, beyond repair?
I do I feel I've
scarred my soul
leaving behind nothing
just ash blowing
in the wind
for the carrion to pick at
my azure skies once so bright
now a bloody crimson
I've let the vultures
feast off my demise
while i'm still walking
too strong willed to lay down
give in, I press on
half dead
with the partial truths
I tell myself
lingering in the shadows
lest the sun scorch
my wretched being
demon's licking at my insides
screaming feed me more Crimsin
hide Brenda away don't let her speak
no not a word, stitch her mouth closed
cos she would call to the heavens
for deliverance from
her ghastly existence
beaten, broken
I still take flight
with my tarnished wings
my fate not sealed I shall be released!!!
Published 8th Nov 2013
| Edited 9th Nov 2013
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8th Nov 2013 10:49pm
Such a motion of hope amdist the pain of it all!...
Love this Lady Crim...
You define the meaning of a soldier...
Keep Marching Forward!
XOXO
Fire
Love this Lady Crim...
You define the meaning of a soldier...
Keep Marching Forward!
XOXO
Fire
8th Nov 2013 11:01pm
thank you beautiful Fire I hope you know how much I've come to love and admire you.. much love Crim
Anonymous
8th Nov 2013 11:26pm
Crim,
You are a soldier and they never give in or up! There is always hope and I think you show that in your writing. You are that strong, you just ahven't completely realized it yet. I have faith in you ; )
tornado
You are a soldier and they never give in or up! There is always hope and I think you show that in your writing. You are that strong, you just ahven't completely realized it yet. I have faith in you ; )
tornado
9th Nov 2013 3:02pm
thank you Tornado I will find that warrior soldier in me and let her out :) thank you for the inspiring words.. peace Crim
9th Nov 2013 00:52am
Always strength in Your Writes Dear Crim!!!
Always Spirit!!!
Excellent Ink!!!
Always Spirit!!!
Excellent Ink!!!
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Anonymous
9th Nov 2013 3:48am
The battle continues on between dark and light..but Brenda, you are an amazing person and i know you have the strength to find the balance.
9th Nov 2013 3:05pm
thank you Vee for the insightful comment.. yes light and dark do battle for center stage in me.. needing to find the balance is key.. thank you lovely lady.. peace Brenda
9th Nov 2013 4:56am
No, your fate is not sealed, Brenda. You need Crim to get through. Thank her and move forward!
9th Nov 2013 3:06pm
yes Crim is the strong one in me.. thank you Atakti for pointing that out.. I will press on.. peace Crim
9th Nov 2013 5:47am
Jesus Christ! It's as if you went from really good poet to great poet over night a few weeks ago. Whatever you're doing, whatever your muse, whatever you're feeling, hold onto it because you are laying it out in an amazing fashion lately. Hard, Raw, Wicked, Crimsin!
Gemini
Gemini
9th Nov 2013 3:08pm
Gemini you made my whole week with your comment.. i'll try to let wicked Crimsin out on the page more often :) peace Crim
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9th Nov 2013 3:06pm
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