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Broken Soul's
and I wonder...
Where do broken souls go...
After the battles over
and broken bones start to show...
Major fissures...
Gaping holes
When the pain...
Just overflows...
Oh ... but yall dont hear me though
Can you tell me where they go...
Where can they go
to lay burdens down...
be vulnerable...
weapons on the ground
Where can they go...
for comfort ... more
to get the soothin
when hearts are sore...
Oh can you tell...me
Where do broken souls go...
To let go and be free
No Armour...
Bare to the bone...
Can you tell me...
Where do brokens souls have
As a place to call there home...
Cause broken souls...
Are really Spiritual Soldiers...
It's our battles won that make
us older...
It's Loves' Lost...
that make us bitter...
It's no New Love...
That keeps us in winter...
It's internal grieving
that brings our rain...
It's having no place
to rest the soul...
That keeps the pain...
Oh... yall dont hear me though...
Where... Do Broken Souls... Go
Where do broken souls go...
After the battles over
and broken bones start to show...
Major fissures...
Gaping holes
When the pain...
Just overflows...
Oh ... but yall dont hear me though
Can you tell me where they go...
Where can they go
to lay burdens down...
be vulnerable...
weapons on the ground
Where can they go...
for comfort ... more
to get the soothin
when hearts are sore...
Oh can you tell...me
Where do broken souls go...
To let go and be free
No Armour...
Bare to the bone...
Can you tell me...
Where do brokens souls have
As a place to call there home...
Cause broken souls...
Are really Spiritual Soldiers...
It's our battles won that make
us older...
It's Loves' Lost...
that make us bitter...
It's no New Love...
That keeps us in winter...
It's internal grieving
that brings our rain...
It's having no place
to rest the soul...
That keeps the pain...
Oh... yall dont hear me though...
Where... Do Broken Souls... Go
Published 8th Nov 2013
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8th Nov 2013 10:21pm
Darn you lol...you got me in tears and in deep thought..Love this read!!!
I wonder this everyday,every second Glad you nailed my feelings on the head.
EXCELLENT!!! As always
I wonder this everyday,every second Glad you nailed my feelings on the head.
EXCELLENT!!! As always
8th Nov 2013 10:25pm
I luvs You girl!....
My sissy from another missy!
I been feelin some kinda way lately love...
just glad my thoughts have a kindred sistah spirit to relate to!
XOXO
Fire
My sissy from another missy!
I been feelin some kinda way lately love...
just glad my thoughts have a kindred sistah spirit to relate to!
XOXO
Fire
8th Nov 2013 10:30pm
Fire this poem touched me deeply i'm a broken soul I came here to get healed in the arms of lovely ones like you.. beautiful heartfelt poem.. much love Brenda :)
8th Nov 2013 10:35pm
Thank You My Crim....
I Loves you and always welcome your comments and feed back
You are a friend of mine indeed.
XOXO
Fire
I Loves you and always welcome your comments and feed back
You are a friend of mine indeed.
XOXO
Fire
8th Nov 2013 10:34pm
I think they all move into my house...the broken are what can be fixed...its the destroyed you have to worry about :)
great poem Fire!!!!!
great poem Fire!!!!!
8th Nov 2013 10:42pm
My wise ol Owl of a friend...
How have you been?
Have missed you much...
and you are right the Destroyers Of the world
are the one to watch out for...
Well said
XOXO
Fire
How have you been?
Have missed you much...
and you are right the Destroyers Of the world
are the one to watch out for...
Well said
XOXO
Fire
8th Nov 2013 11:51pm
I'm glad to see you've added creative art to your poem.:) This write is stimulating and profound. You are such an excellent writer and truly deliver excellence every time. I absolutely love the pic; it gives great life to your poem. I enjoyed!:)
9th Nov 2013 00:35am
Im so glad you enjoyed this...
It was like crying for 20 minutes straight to wrrite it...
Somedays...
are just like that...
Thank YOu for coming bye!
XOXO
FIre
It was like crying for 20 minutes straight to wrrite it...
Somedays...
are just like that...
Thank YOu for coming bye!
XOXO
FIre
9th Nov 2013 1:03am
...as for myself...they go deep inside, looking only upon the beautiful things, trees, skies things truly loved-refusing for months to acknowledge any of the ugliness that tries to touch...some call this the ostrich...I call it self-preservation.
Indeed sometimes weapons must be put to rest...bolt the doors and unplug phones...they say Hermits live a peaceful life...at least for a little while I explore it :)
Wonderful flowing Ink Dear Fire!!!
Indeed sometimes weapons must be put to rest...bolt the doors and unplug phones...they say Hermits live a peaceful life...at least for a little while I explore it :)
Wonderful flowing Ink Dear Fire!!!
9th Nov 2013 3:06am
thank you so much soul....
I feel you...
completely....
thank you for reading and visiting my pages!
XOXO
Fire
I feel you...
completely....
thank you for reading and visiting my pages!
XOXO
Fire
9th Nov 2013 8:36am
This (unfortunately)mirrors my current Mind-Soul-Heart-set.......
A sensitive writer for sensitive people ---
thank you FiYaH ...
A sensitive writer for sensitive people ---
thank you FiYaH ...
11th Nov 2013 2:55am
My Queen, you are truly gifted beyond words that need to be spoken. For you amaze me every time. Thank you for blessing me with your words.
28th Dec 2013 7:43am
They become fertilizer for the dreamscape.
"Indoor container gardening is the most revolutionary form of social unrest and the only action guaranteed to achieve results."
Broken souls wait to be harvested. Prose is like garden globes.
"Indoor container gardening is the most revolutionary form of social unrest and the only action guaranteed to achieve results."
Broken souls wait to be harvested. Prose is like garden globes.
