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SOMETHING REAL
Chase my heart
throw stardust in my eyes
tie my hands
deafened to my cries
I’ve tried to hide
disclosing only my disguise
but you’ve surprised me with desire
with fire licking at my eyes
Begin by thrusting thighs
against my tongue
like unshaven cheeks
and clasp my throat
with your strong fingers
sling my hands
with thongs
while songs are screaming
in the voices of satanic singers
String me up and hang my heart
and ride me high inside my soul
unsheathe deep down
the thorns of my desire
and drown my dreams
and show me something real
reveal in me a feeling
that only I can feel
(Drawing: The Slave by Carlton)
© Carlton Carr 2013
http://othervoices.blog.co.uk/
throw stardust in my eyes
tie my hands
deafened to my cries
I’ve tried to hide
disclosing only my disguise
but you’ve surprised me with desire
with fire licking at my eyes
Begin by thrusting thighs
against my tongue
like unshaven cheeks
and clasp my throat
with your strong fingers
sling my hands
with thongs
while songs are screaming
in the voices of satanic singers
String me up and hang my heart
and ride me high inside my soul
unsheathe deep down
the thorns of my desire
and drown my dreams
and show me something real
reveal in me a feeling
that only I can feel
(Drawing: The Slave by Carlton)
© Carlton Carr 2013
http://othervoices.blog.co.uk/
Published 8th Nov 2013
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9th Nov 2013 1:21am
Whew...:) The portrait is appropriately named for this S & M treat! This is yet another example of impassioned love with no boundaries. On the beautifully sculpted body, the love scars are an eminent token of this relationship. The submissive and dominant are well displayed throughout this piece of carefully constructed words. Deliberate words that grab at me: clasp my throat with your strong fingers (that alone puts great emphasis on the vulnerability of what is boundless love).
String me up and hang my heart
And ride me high inside my soul
That's an amazing choice of words that runs deep to my core...
I love each stanza and how it depicts a yearning, an unrelenting desire to be tamed, intimacy, impulses (ready to be acted upon).
You captivate and intrigue me with the sincerity of your emotions in art and ink.
I'm beginning to feel like a third party participant. Lol
Thanks for sharing such a fascinating sweet treat.:) A delight!
String me up and hang my heart
And ride me high inside my soul
That's an amazing choice of words that runs deep to my core...
I love each stanza and how it depicts a yearning, an unrelenting desire to be tamed, intimacy, impulses (ready to be acted upon).
You captivate and intrigue me with the sincerity of your emotions in art and ink.
I'm beginning to feel like a third party participant. Lol
Thanks for sharing such a fascinating sweet treat.:) A delight!
9th Nov 2013 5:26am
That's because you are a participant Melissa. You are walking through my story with me, word by word and image by image (and man by man lol).
Thanks again for your thoughtfull and well considered response - and of course by honouring me by adding this to your reading list.
Best. Carl.
Thanks again for your thoughtfull and well considered response - and of course by honouring me by adding this to your reading list.
Best. Carl.
