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Shifting Uneasy
You have me at a disadvantage,
uneasy in my easy chair
with your wordily spoken ways,
uncomfortable truly it is,
you should come with a warning..
sensual weather warning even.
Hot spells throughout the day
becoming wetter as the evening draws in..
It's not right when your imaginative
mind wants to do wrongs with me,
makes my desire leap, jumping across
tall buildings without safety nets with
hands tied.
it's wrong,
it's not proper,
but..
don't you dare stop it, not now Mr,
as much as It makes me shift uneasily to
the point of locking the door to the small room,
I also need it, desperately..
So if this is all and everything that ever
unfolds, then as it shall be.
But if we choose another path, then
you better bring along some stamina
going to need it too,
you owe me big big time
from all the uncomfortable moments
I've endured because of you.
uneasy in my easy chair
with your wordily spoken ways,
uncomfortable truly it is,
you should come with a warning..
sensual weather warning even.
Hot spells throughout the day
becoming wetter as the evening draws in..
It's not right when your imaginative
mind wants to do wrongs with me,
makes my desire leap, jumping across
tall buildings without safety nets with
hands tied.
it's wrong,
it's not proper,
but..
don't you dare stop it, not now Mr,
as much as It makes me shift uneasily to
the point of locking the door to the small room,
I also need it, desperately..
So if this is all and everything that ever
unfolds, then as it shall be.
But if we choose another path, then
you better bring along some stamina
going to need it too,
you owe me big big time
from all the uncomfortable moments
I've endured because of you.
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Re: Shifting Uneasy
Anonymous
8th Nov 2013 5:47pm
Rose,
Love the uneasy gait of this write. Love your line: "but.. don't you dare stop it, not now Mr"
Just enought to keep it off balance, yet moving.
Enjoyed!
tornado
Love the uneasy gait of this write. Love your line: "but.. don't you dare stop it, not now Mr"
Just enought to keep it off balance, yet moving.
Enjoyed!
tornado
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Re: Shifting Uneasy
8th Nov 2013 8:37pm
I really like this. It captures the forbidden nature of our words and yet the inability to give them up because of need thus leaving us forever destined to occupy the "small room."
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re: Re: Shifting Uneasy
8th Nov 2013 9:13pm
Yes agreed gahddess
Until words become actions
Then the small room is the most welcome of rooms hehe
Until words become actions
Then the small room is the most welcome of rooms hehe
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9th Nov 2013 00:26am
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Anonymous
9th Nov 2013 4:07am
Dripping with sensuality, love this line :)
Hot spells throughout the day
becoming wetter as the evening draws in..
Hot spells throughout the day
becoming wetter as the evening draws in..
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9th Nov 2013 7:05am
Re: Shifting Uneasy
9th Nov 2013 6:42am
The third and fourth stanzas are brilliant ... The building of tension and breaking of boundaries, and ends we go to break them ... This smolders.
LSP
LSP
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9th Nov 2013 7:06am
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Anonymous
9th Nov 2013 7:38am
Ah, those locked room computer calls... they do make things better and worse... =)
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9th Nov 2013 8:29am
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9th Nov 2013 10:24am
Wow.... Mmmmm the pic. Works in perfect harmony with this smoking, steamy ink... oh to be a fly on the wall
of that lil room! lol
of that lil room! lol
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15th Nov 2013 2:06pm
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