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Re: Eat
5th Nov 2013 6:14pm
re: Re: Eat
5th Nov 2013 8:59pm
Re: Eat
5th Nov 2013 6:16pm
Don't mind if I do!!! Mmmmmm yum yum... BUurrp! 'Cuse me! Ah can a brotha git a napkin!? never mind I just clean my fingers by lickin them off too! lmao
Seriously seriously HOTT spill lady!!! Wow lol
Seriously seriously HOTT spill lady!!! Wow lol
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re: Re: Eat
5th Nov 2013 9:02pm
Did it taste good to you baby?! You missed a spot. Thanks boo so happy you enjoyed this piece!
Red
Red
Re: Eat
5th Nov 2013 6:41pm
What a feast one to savor again and again :)
Wonderful Ink Dear Red-Art for sure!!!
Wonderful Ink Dear Red-Art for sure!!!
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re: Re: Eat
5th Nov 2013 9:03pm
Re: Eat
5th Nov 2013 7:26pm
Red I've been ravishingly hungry thank you for providing such a erotic feast!!! peace Crim
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re: Re: Eat
5th Nov 2013 9:04pm
Re: Eat
Anonymous
5th Nov 2013 8:31pm
This piece is so great and well-written. I love this. I cant eat it, haha. Well done.
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5th Nov 2013 9:05pm
Re: Eat
Anonymous
5th Nov 2013 9:53pm
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re: Re: Eat
5th Nov 2013 11:13pm
Lol so did you enjoy imbibing in this luscious piece?! Thank you lol for the comment. :-)
Red
Red
Re: Eat
5th Nov 2013 11:29pm
Dear Red...such a sumptuous sensuous you. Im always glad to see you here. Good read!
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re: Re: Eat
6th Nov 2013 7:59pm
Thank you are always as gracious as you name.No worries I am always lurking somewhere lol
Red
Red
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Anonymous
6th Nov 2013 5:10am
Out minds must have been running along the same lines... great write!
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/134739-feast/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/134739-feast/
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re: Re: Eat
6th Nov 2013 8:00pm
Re: Eat
6th Nov 2013 10:22pm
Whew girl! This is truly a feast fit for a king....or queen, depending on preference.
Such sexy lines drawn throughout this sensual crafted work of art, Red! Five star dining right'cher' ..........
bon appetit Xo
Such sexy lines drawn throughout this sensual crafted work of art, Red! Five star dining right'cher' ..........
bon appetit Xo
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6th Nov 2013 11:18pm
Re: Eat
7th Nov 2013 7:14am
Sonya, I had absolutely forgotten the extent of your gift......til I read this tonight. This was stellar.
Just as I remember from another time and place : )
Just as I remember from another time and place : )
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re: Re: Eat
7th Nov 2013 12:16pm
Well if this is not a pleasant blast from the past!! Thank you Archie for the very gracious and generous comment, I think you will find I have evolved a bit and kind of found my voice so to speak! Thank you for stopping by!
Red
Red