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Go On With Your Efforts But Count Me Out!
The funny thing about walls
is that not only do they keep people out
the also keep people in
If you subscribe like some amongst us
there are compositions that don't deserve the light of day
simply a cesspool of abject sin
So obsessed with delineating art from garbage called porn
prey to the creator for deliverance
for such thoughts will lead to a fiery existence
The intense human desires shouldn't bow down so
weaker beings know not what they do
write of the sugar and delicacies only of fine romance
They must be happy now that parameters are placed
on what you can say in your creative hue
the high doctors of what makes the composition valuable
Ah but be careful in that condemnation
beware for whom the bells tolls
for really all that is human made is in the end malleable
Plan your secret forums, restrict access and curtail extreme thoughts
create your alternative websites and the like
I don't have time to worry about driving wedges in other people's words
really that kind of red lining is for the birds
is that not only do they keep people out
the also keep people in
If you subscribe like some amongst us
there are compositions that don't deserve the light of day
simply a cesspool of abject sin
So obsessed with delineating art from garbage called porn
prey to the creator for deliverance
for such thoughts will lead to a fiery existence
The intense human desires shouldn't bow down so
weaker beings know not what they do
write of the sugar and delicacies only of fine romance
They must be happy now that parameters are placed
on what you can say in your creative hue
the high doctors of what makes the composition valuable
Ah but be careful in that condemnation
beware for whom the bells tolls
for really all that is human made is in the end malleable
Plan your secret forums, restrict access and curtail extreme thoughts
create your alternative websites and the like
I don't have time to worry about driving wedges in other people's words
really that kind of red lining is for the birds
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Re: Go On With Your Efforts But Count Me Out!
2nd Nov 2013 9:04pm
Censorship of sex and the like...harsh words, thoughts written or read on a page-music.
Such things boggle my mind...I've written in places such thoughts...those who are offended, cant help but stare at such things (rubberneckers in car wreck scenes)then complain of it's vulgarity.
If I don't like something...I flip or move to something I personally like.
I'm not a fan of Bestiality...but I live in W.V.
where men are men and sheep are scared...so I just stay away from the fields and let them have their way.
Excellence here Jazz!!!
Such things boggle my mind...I've written in places such thoughts...those who are offended, cant help but stare at such things (rubberneckers in car wreck scenes)then complain of it's vulgarity.
If I don't like something...I flip or move to something I personally like.
I'm not a fan of Bestiality...but I live in W.V.
where men are men and sheep are scared...so I just stay away from the fields and let them have their way.
Excellence here Jazz!!!
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re: Re: Go On With Your Efforts But Count Me Out!
not trying to suggest we can't dislike something of course, but I am just getting sick of all the talk about how this site has gone to pot and it is all because of what one person here or there wrote.
The concern about the unjustified awards people give to themselves or the plagiarism is just wrong but things can be done about that without putting a leash on what people can come up with.
I say the same thing about music---don't really care what genre you put Keiko Matsui, Enya, Boney James, Fourplay, Andreas Vollenweider, etc. I just know I like the music.
The concern about the unjustified awards people give to themselves or the plagiarism is just wrong but things can be done about that without putting a leash on what people can come up with.
I say the same thing about music---don't really care what genre you put Keiko Matsui, Enya, Boney James, Fourplay, Andreas Vollenweider, etc. I just know I like the music.
Re: Go On With Your Efforts But Count Me Out!
Anonymous
2nd Nov 2013 11:08pm
Nice write, Jazz - Aside from people being out and out abusive, or being proved to have stolen other people's work time and again, there is no reason this site should not be allowed to continue to allow people to write what they are inspired to write - for whatever reason.
But abuse cannot be tolerated...
But abuse cannot be tolerated...
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re: Re: Go On With Your Efforts But Count Me Out!
3rd Nov 2013 4:14pm
Re: Go On With Your Efforts But Count Me Out!
this whole place is going upside down.. like planet earth is running outta life... forgiveness is an element that not many of us have in abundance ....some go for 'eye for an eye' while mahatma fights with a smile...issues like plagiarism and mindless trolls is all over this place n not to forget the countless amount of abuses that comes in response for it .... I recently got in contact with one of the accused plagiarist n told his deeds were something that can't be overlooked ...I asked him to write with a honest heart .. did I do right ? well I don't know.. but I felt sorry ( not for him ) when everybody responded abusively.. I feel talented writers / poets are losing their grace.. I'm glad that u are not one of em ....
write on sir,
cyanide...
write on sir,
cyanide...
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re: Re: Go On With Your Efforts But Count Me Out!
3rd Nov 2013 4:18pm
I would like to think it isn't that bad. My own perspective is that there are some people doing really troublesome things. In that regard DUP is like anything else in society. What I object to is the more reactionary movement which tends to paint a broad picture of everyone. I also object to the idea that we must conform to someone else's idea of what poetry is.
Thanks for the introspective comment!
Thanks for the introspective comment!
Re: Go On With Your Efforts But Count Me Out!
3rd Nov 2013 4:48am
I agree with everyone that gave feedback.
My thoughts written by YOU! How dare he beat me? Lol! Nonetheless, this is why you're partially featured in my new piece. Xo
My thoughts written by YOU! How dare he beat me? Lol! Nonetheless, this is why you're partially featured in my new piece. Xo
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re: Re: Go On With Your Efforts But Count Me Out!
3rd Nov 2013 4:20pm
Re: Go On With Your Efforts But Count Me Out!
3rd Nov 2013 6:04am
Exceptional piece my brother, I'm at a loss at how the indignant, self righteous Pass judgement
n the blatantly obvious plagarizers continue to
go on like there isn't such a thing as, KARMA... I heard 'she' can be a real Beeotch! lol... Loved ur ink bro!
n the blatantly obvious plagarizers continue to
go on like there isn't such a thing as, KARMA... I heard 'she' can be a real Beeotch! lol... Loved ur ink bro!
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re: Re: Go On With Your Efforts But Count Me Out!
3rd Nov 2013 4:23pm
there is certainly some stuff here that I am not into, especially the compositions about cutting oneself. However I am not going to ever suggest that those writers should express themselves, especially if having an outlet makes them less likely to actually go through with the suggested acts.
I am humbled by your thoughtful comment.
I am humbled by your thoughtful comment.
Re: Go On With Your Efforts But Count Me Out!
Anonymous
3rd Nov 2013 7:11am
Excellent observations Mr. Jazz, we're all here (most of us) to write and grow as writers, time to focus on what's really important.
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re: Re: Go On With Your Efforts But Count Me Out!
3rd Nov 2013 4:24pm
Re: Go On With Your Efforts But Count Me Out!
3rd Nov 2013 2:59pm
Ditto. I totally agree with the fellow poets, here .
People play and prey on what they are mostly ignorant towards.
They at times can't see the bigger picture.
Jazz, I tip my hat to you Sir !!
Bravo.
KG
People play and prey on what they are mostly ignorant towards.
They at times can't see the bigger picture.
Jazz, I tip my hat to you Sir !!
Bravo.
KG
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re: Re: Go On With Your Efforts But Count Me Out!
3rd Nov 2013 4:27pm
As I suggested before, people are going to do things you don't like. I just don't think anything productive comes from harping on it. How we respond to behavior is just as important as the original act itself.