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Expose My Ass (COMMON FUCKING SENSE)
a bee happens by
(earth, the outside its kinda his hangout)
then this stupid human starts flailing and screaming
and jumping,
then bee stings the fuck out of the human
moral of the story...ignore the fucking bee and it would have
buzzed on, but no....the stupid human had to overreact...
per usual
(earth, the outside its kinda his hangout)
then this stupid human starts flailing and screaming
and jumping,
then bee stings the fuck out of the human
moral of the story...ignore the fucking bee and it would have
buzzed on, but no....the stupid human had to overreact...
per usual
Published 1st Nov 2013
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1st Nov 2013 7:27pm
1st Nov 2013 7:44pm
I dunno Nikkimoe, I've read this three times and I'm begining to susspect you're a woman of wisdom. :)
probably change 'this humans for these humans.
great stuff Missus, shine on
probably change 'this humans for these humans.
great stuff Missus, shine on
Anonymous
1st Nov 2013 11:49pm
Slicker'ish, Nikki. I LIKE it. Common sense... ain't common. Sting that fucker again, lil bee!
**Needs More Reads** BUMP!
**Needs More Reads** BUMP!
2nd Nov 2013 3:03am
Yeah, seems like these days, common sense ain't so common. Very nice work!! Short, to the point.
Anonymous
2nd Nov 2013 3:56am
Ha! Awesome, good to see your work again! Very clever indeed, Mike.
2nd Nov 2013 11:51am
Hah! Yeah! This. Indeed. I go through these serious goddamn spells of misanthropy from time to time. I've cut myself off from society more than a few times over the years, getting away from overreactions of humans...disappearing into the countryside for disturbing amounts of time & worrying friends & relatives. The bees never gave me no trouble. Got stung by yellowjackets a number of times, but that was because of mowing over their nests. I'd've stung me, too. People get this way over bugs & snakes. I adore them. I get awfully upset about it sometimes. It's a button of mine. Thanks for the observation, Nikki. Right-O.
2nd Nov 2013 3:24pm
2nd Nov 2013 5:57pm
Yes some of us are stupid overreactive assholes...this piece explains that perfectly :-) nice going...
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