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Haiku Vll
(Samhain Hymns)
Twisted tree joints creak
With wind's wailing moon cackles
Dirges for souls damned
Twisted tree joints creak
With wind's wailing moon cackles
Dirges for souls damned
Written by
DarkEnchantress
Published 30th Oct 2013
| Edited 19th Dec 2013
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Re: Haiku Vlll
30th Oct 2013 9:46pm
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30th Oct 2013 10:19pm
Thank you, my Friend.....i always appreciate your comments. and your visits to my realm. xo
Just thought that I would write in the 'spirit' of the season:) That pic is very creepy IKR? could almost inspire another poem....or a nitemare at the very least:0
Just thought that I would write in the 'spirit' of the season:) That pic is very creepy IKR? could almost inspire another poem....or a nitemare at the very least:0
Re: Haiku Vlll
31st Oct 2013 00:04am
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31st Oct 2013 1:08am
Halloween/samhain is one of favorite times of the year!
I tend to favor the eerie, stranger side of life during this season!
Thank you, my friend, for your comments! You know that your visits mean a great deal to me! x
Happy Hauntings!
I tend to favor the eerie, stranger side of life during this season!
Thank you, my friend, for your comments! You know that your visits mean a great deal to me! x
Happy Hauntings!
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31st Oct 2013 1:58am
can't recall who said it, Auden or
more likely Isherwood, but it was
something to the effect that a
darkening storm is more
threateningly seen when a butterfly
passes across it..:)
more likely Isherwood, but it was
something to the effect that a
darkening storm is more
threateningly seen when a butterfly
passes across it..:)
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31st Oct 2013 2:44pm
Paul,
O--thank you! I have not read this one before. The contrast is soo vivid...evokes so many emotional responses through multiple interpretations.
Appreciate this little 'extra'. x
O--thank you! I have not read this one before. The contrast is soo vivid...evokes so many emotional responses through multiple interpretations.
Appreciate this little 'extra'. x
Re: Haiku Vlll
31st Oct 2013 8:04pm
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31st Oct 2013 8:37pm
Thank you, Case!
My Friend, soo happy to learn that he icy fingers of my words walked their pathways--up and down your back bones!
Always appreciate your visits to the darkness within my realm!
(Take heed of what follows among the shadows...behind you!!)
My Friend, soo happy to learn that he icy fingers of my words walked their pathways--up and down your back bones!
Always appreciate your visits to the darkness within my realm!
(Take heed of what follows among the shadows...behind you!!)
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31st Oct 2013 11:01pm
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1st Nov 2013 3:32am
Thank you kindly, my Friend! I appreciate the time that you spent reading ,an commenting on my Haiku.
Happy Halloween, and a Good Samhain, to you!
Bennacht Ort!
Happy Halloween, and a Good Samhain, to you!
Bennacht Ort!
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1st Nov 2013 3:39am
My Friend, i thank you for venturing into my dark realm....your 'bravery' is appreciated, as well as your comment!
I am glad that you are able to 'feel' the fear!
I am glad that you are able to 'feel' the fear!
Re: Haiku Vlll
8th Nov 2013 6:32pm
My sweet sorceress this is Awesome!!!
You give Great Haiku!!!
Sir Lancelott
You give Great Haiku!!!
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: Haiku Vlll
8th Nov 2013 6:48pm
Aww..My thanks to thee, my loyal knight!
'Tis glad, that I am, that my piece hath pleased thee!
(I hath been known to giveth great haunting pleasure....)
'Tis glad, that I am, that my piece hath pleased thee!
(I hath been known to giveth great haunting pleasure....)
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8th Nov 2013 6:53pm
Pleasure from a Beautiful sorceress is always welcomed. You ink so well sweets!!
Sir Lancelott
Sir Lancelott
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Re: Haiku Vlll
10th Nov 2013 11:19pm
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10th Nov 2013 11:41pm
Thank you for for taking the time to read my Haiku, and for leaving me your thoughts....both are truly appreciated!
Always glad to welcome newcomers within my realm!
("Soul-licking"--now that is an awesome word/compliment)
Feel free to drift in any time, Jonathon.....
Always glad to welcome newcomers within my realm!
("Soul-licking"--now that is an awesome word/compliment)
Feel free to drift in any time, Jonathon.....
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11th Nov 2013 4:45pm
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11th Nov 2013 00:09am
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Thank you my friend, for reading, and commenting on my Haiku....truly appreciate both, Jake! :) x
So happy to know that my piece gave you the shivers...intended affect accurately achieved! :0
So happy to know that my piece gave you the shivers...intended affect accurately achieved! :0
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21st Nov 2013 10:46pm
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re: Re: Haiku Vlll
22nd Nov 2013 6:16am
Gabriel,
i am ever so glad to have you back in my realm,mo cara! :)
I am very pleased that you appreciated the aural aspect of my piece....thank you for "listening", and for your thoughtful, generous comments!
Thanks for the visit! You are always most welcome here!! xo
i am ever so glad to have you back in my realm,mo cara! :)
I am very pleased that you appreciated the aural aspect of my piece....thank you for "listening", and for your thoughtful, generous comments!
Thanks for the visit! You are always most welcome here!! xo
Re: Haiku Vlll
25th Nov 2013 3:02am
bhean chara
cúpla focal, go leor íomhánna.
great stuff Enchanted one, shine on
cúpla focal, go leor íomhánna.
great stuff Enchanted one, shine on
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25th Nov 2013 4:13am
Go raibh mi'le maith agat, mo cara!
I truly appreciate your thoughtful, generous comments, and I am glad that you enjoyed the images.
(You make me feel as if i am a shining star) :)
You are always welcome in my realm!
I truly appreciate your thoughtful, generous comments, and I am glad that you enjoyed the images.
(You make me feel as if i am a shining star) :)
You are always welcome in my realm!
Re: Haiku Vlll
13th Dec 2013 7:38pm
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13th Dec 2013 7:46pm
In the darkness dwells like souls...
I thank you for taking the time to read this piece, and for leaving me your generous comments--truly appreciated.
Please feel free to haunt my realm--anytime. You are most welcome!
I thank you for taking the time to read this piece, and for leaving me your generous comments--truly appreciated.
Please feel free to haunt my realm--anytime. You are most welcome!
Re. Haiku Vll
21st Dec 2015 2:41pm
Hauntingly enchanting imagery.
The sounds of creaking and cackling were brought to life.
The sounds of creaking and cackling were brought to life.
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Re. Haiku Vll
22nd Sep 2017 2:16pm
Wow! I love this dark haiku - "With wind's wailing moon cackles" such an original thought and line - this could easily be a competition winner :-)
Big Hugs :-)
Big Hugs :-)
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22nd Sep 2017 4:19pm
Mo Chara...truly delighted that you enjoyed my darker side! You have so deeply honored me with such high regards--especially your comment on the wind's wailing, and the moon's cackling! To this day, i have absolutely no idea what inspired that particular line! I can only say, that, Halloween/Samhain is one of my very favorite seasonal holidays, and i do get soo caught up in all the celebrating...and the more frightening aspects--(like sights, and sounds)--associated with this time year! Thank you for taking the time visit the more caliginous corners of my realm, and for such high praise! I am soo humbled and appreciative! Hugs right back to You!