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The One That Got Away...you should have seen it.
Got one in my head
right now
have to write it down
no pen or pencil
no paper to be found
it's one of a kind
the words flow
the lines rhyme
it's so fine
a masterpiece
the best of it's time
need to get it down.
Here we go
paper and pencil
I have found
Oh No!!!
say it ain't so
words,rhymes and lines
they were all in my mind
but now...how
my thoughts I can not find
my one of a kind
left behind.
Oh well
maybe next time
I can shine...
I'm going to bed.
right now
have to write it down
no pen or pencil
no paper to be found
it's one of a kind
the words flow
the lines rhyme
it's so fine
a masterpiece
the best of it's time
need to get it down.
Here we go
paper and pencil
I have found
Oh No!!!
say it ain't so
words,rhymes and lines
they were all in my mind
but now...how
my thoughts I can not find
my one of a kind
left behind.
Oh well
maybe next time
I can shine...
I'm going to bed.
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Re: The One That Got Away...you should have seen it.
Anonymous
27th Oct 2013 3:08pm
oh, dude...I know this sentiment..the lines dancing on your mind..then poof! gone!
I often just go to bed then too..but, like a true poet
you wrote a poem about writing a poem haha
nice work, hash
I often just go to bed then too..but, like a true poet
you wrote a poem about writing a poem haha
nice work, hash
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27th Oct 2013 3:28pm
That's it mik poof! gone (ha)...thanks mikimoondancer peace and love to you :)
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27th Oct 2013 3:11pm
hopefuly next time when muse visit you you can find pen and paper aand write it down. for you and for us.
sometime I dream during the sleep the poem, and by awaken forget it..it most pity..
sometime I dream during the sleep the poem, and by awaken forget it..it most pity..
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27th Oct 2013 3:26pm
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Anonymous
27th Oct 2013 3:30pm
this is so wonderful and we have all experienced this.....
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27th Oct 2013 9:48pm
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27th Oct 2013 3:43pm
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27th Oct 2013 9:49pm
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27th Oct 2013 3:56pm
I can DEFINITELY relate, I do the same thing with song lyrics and riffs, too. Any artist can relate.
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27th Oct 2013 9:52pm
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27th Oct 2013 3:58pm
W H Y is it, that so many of our best ideas are such fleeting fantasies? It's almost as if our muses have a mischievous side....teasing and taunting us at the most in-opportune moments!
My friend,this is truly a tribute to all poets who were unable to 'capture' that one, special elusive inspiration. :)
My friend,this is truly a tribute to all poets who were unable to 'capture' that one, special elusive inspiration. :)
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27th Oct 2013 9:55pm
So true...thoughts pop into our minds at crazy times.Yes,for all of us.(thank you)
Re: The One That Got Away...you should have seen it.
27th Oct 2013 4:22pm
I get that all the time...if I'd caught all I would be greater than ....umm...its gone now. Good read, Hashman.
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27th Oct 2013 9:57pm
Re: The One That Got Away...you should have seen it.
27th Oct 2013 5:37pm
I always keep a note
book in my pocket, but
usually in the wrong
jacket..:(
book in my pocket, but
usually in the wrong
jacket..:(
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27th Oct 2013 10:01pm
Got to write a note to yourself...i am always looking for a pen,got a bunch,but you know.(thanks bro)
Re: The One That Got Away...you should have seen it.
27th Oct 2013 6:50pm
Hell yea! I've said many times, if only I could've 'captured'
those ones I lost they could've been the very best I ever inked! I feel u on this for real bro. Smh ain't it a bitch to lose
that magical moment!? lol
those ones I lost they could've been the very best I ever inked! I feel u on this for real bro. Smh ain't it a bitch to lose
that magical moment!? lol
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27th Oct 2013 10:03pm
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27th Oct 2013 9:52pm
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27th Oct 2013 10:07pm
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28th Oct 2013 3:00am
lmbo.... last line stellar....
yes, when in doubt, go to bed....and that goes for ANYTHING! :) Enjoyed this Hash! Xo
yes, when in doubt, go to bed....and that goes for ANYTHING! :) Enjoyed this Hash! Xo
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28th Oct 2013 10:12pm
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Anonymous
28th Oct 2013 4:09am
What kind of phone do you have? Record it as a memo to yourself...
And yeah, like I ever think of that at the time, lol...
And yeah, like I ever think of that at the time, lol...
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28th Oct 2013 10:15pm
Yes,Minou sometimes that does work...but sometimes just seconds later they are gone :)
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Anonymous
29th Oct 2013 1:02am
Don't I know it... so many words left unsaid. And sometimes, perhaps that is not a bad thing...
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Re: The One That Got Away...you should have seen it.
28th Oct 2013 6:05pm
Right, you've got it all
in your mind and
when it comes to
pen and paper
words and rhymes
begin to vanish.
Like dreams ...
Very ovservative :-).
in your mind and
when it comes to
pen and paper
words and rhymes
begin to vanish.
Like dreams ...
Very ovservative :-).
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28th Oct 2013 10:23pm
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Anonymous
29th Oct 2013 2:19am
oh my goodness Mr. Hash, you're speaking for all of us on here lol The most frustrating feeling when a brilliance comes to mind and instantly disappears, our ink is not fast enough to catch it.
Totally relatable, thumbs up!
Totally relatable, thumbs up!
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29th Oct 2013 9:26am
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Anonymous
29th Oct 2013 3:06pm
True appreciation for this piece, Hashman. Cleverly written. Communicates the lightening strike of inspiration, gone in a flash.. I usually just say "damn it".
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29th Oct 2013 11:14pm
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2nd Nov 2013 2:48pm
this has happened to me a time or FEW! lol ..very relateable and well written..enjoyed!!!
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3rd Nov 2013 12:02pm
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17th Dec 2013 5:50pm
This happens all the time. I'm glad to see so many others that relate to the experience.
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18th Dec 2013 11:41pm