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Daydreamin'...........(thinking of u)
"......Spending my day thinkin' 'bout you girl
Being here with you, being near with you
I can't explain myself
Why I feel like I do....."
......her body is tired
and I just don't want it to be so
(She says I'm too good to her)
woman, you just don't know..........
".....she's faced the hardest times you could imagine
And many times her eyes fought back the tears, no no.....
And when her youthful world was about to fall in
Each time her slender shoulders bore the weight of all her fears
And a sorrow no one hears
Still rings in midnight silence, in her ears
Let her cry, for she's a lady
Let her dream, for she's a child
Let the rain fall down upon her
She's a free and gentle flower growing wild....."
I want to bathe your body
Let me draw your bath
Let me rub those soft, tired shoulders
....tell you something good, let me make you laugh
(.....this pleasure is all mine)
and time after time
I awaken just to find
that
I
cannot
get you
off
my
mind.......
Let me put you to bed
Let me try something different instead........
Let me come inside your heart
Face to face, eye to eye
this is where it starts
Please baby, don't you move
Feel my love growing deep inside
Kiss my waiting lips....let's start this wonderful trip
to paradise,
you and I
".....I want you, babe"
will you be mine?
until our next life time?
Can't stop thinking about you
Girl, there ain't no doubt
I got to keep this to myself
but my soul just wants to shout.....
I'm 1000 miles away
yet I close my eyes and I still see your face
just as clear as a
bright blue sun-shiney day.
Lay your head upon my chest
Take yourself a needed rest
Let me love you
I truly love you, babe
"Let me take you home
to keep you safe and warm
til the early dawn warms up to the sun
It would be so nice......."
Spending my forever
with you.......
Author's Note-( I had really debated sharing this with but one person and in the process of posting the video-and YouTube's video processing ruining the video, I almost trashed the whole thing. Edited the vid, uploaded again and the result was worse. Must have been an omen. But the message in this montage was more important to me than it's flaws.....so here it is. Hope you enjoy it. ........and I hope *she* doesn't mind me showing my adoration in such a public forum. Much credit due to two of my favorite 70's R&B artist and the slight covers used- "Still In Love With You". Al Green and "Wildflower", by New Birth ) xoxoxo
Published 26th Oct 2013
| Edited 29th Oct 2013
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26th Oct 2013 7:12pm
Beautiful...I hope she didn't mind either...a light under a bushel is unbearable. MrM.
27th Oct 2013 3:12am
26th Oct 2013 9:27pm
Beautiful, I only wonder why you hesitated sharing this. It would make any woman's heart melt!
27th Oct 2013 3:13am
26th Oct 2013 11:48pm
...that voice of yours, that guitar of yours, those amazing words of yours,.... makes one beautiful creation. So in love with this...Xoxo
http://youtu.be/6uXqCogvhh8
http://youtu.be/6uXqCogvhh8
27th Oct 2013 3:15am
......."flaws and all"? You are too kind. (I bet you know most of the words.......) ; )
27th Oct 2013 3:35am
27th Oct 2013 3:37am
Since you shared that wonderful song with me , check this one out.....flaws and all ; )
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DYd7sOiN5sM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DYd7sOiN5sM
27th Oct 2013 4:07am
27th Oct 2013 4:13am
Thank you sir ! (Helps to own your own studio and a multi-intrumentalist too) ; )
28th Oct 2013 5:24pm
28th Oct 2013 6:02pm
29th Oct 2013 6:41am
29th Oct 2013 7:27pm
Al Green and New Birth says it all. Smooth and Billy D'ish minus the colt 45. Kudos, I enjoyed it though..
