deepundergroundpoetry.com
Numbing Embrace !!!
Mysterious urge vibrating within
a prick of fear
picturing hideous dreams
Quivering soul
of soulless love
Blending into cruel realities.
Heart spanning
valley of tears
in the finest creepy night
Figure shrinking
into dry crumpled skin
inducing sense of coherence.
An Unrelenting loving slurp
those thorns of trust
I am dead as I shall be
in your numb embrace.
a prick of fear
picturing hideous dreams
Quivering soul
of soulless love
Blending into cruel realities.
Heart spanning
valley of tears
in the finest creepy night
Figure shrinking
into dry crumpled skin
inducing sense of coherence.
An Unrelenting loving slurp
those thorns of trust
I am dead as I shall be
in your numb embrace.
Published 26th Oct 2013
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 9
reading list entries 1
comments 22
reads 921
Commenting Preference:
The author is looking for friendly feedback.
26th Oct 2013 5:59pm
Tell'em to keep those embraces to himself.
Felt like hugging them equaled being dead.(inside)..and I don't do the dead! o_O lol...
...eerie, sad yet beautifully written....Xo
Felt like hugging them equaled being dead.(inside)..and I don't do the dead! o_O lol...
...eerie, sad yet beautifully written....Xo
27th Oct 2013 7:58am
27th Oct 2013 12:53pm
28th Oct 2013 5:16am
28th Oct 2013 10:47am
27th Oct 2013 7:47pm
Strong and beautiful write.
No one needs numb embraces
which leave us hollow inside.
No one needs numb embraces
which leave us hollow inside.
28th Oct 2013 5:17am
29th Oct 2013 8:39am
Part of me feels sorrow in the words you use and yet looking at the picture makes me want to somehow find a way to tap into that positive vibe that must be there somewhere.
29th Oct 2013 9:28am
29th Oct 2013 10:05am
29th Oct 2013 10:10am
With the cigar in hand ? lol
Well thanks for stopping by, commenting and adding this piece to your list :)
29th Oct 2013 11:26am
Smoking kills but i dont bother when already got d divine death with ds verse...wish u join in dt death carnival...
30th Oct 2013 5:04am
30th Oct 2013 7:38am
walking along with many emotion hide in invisible hands…d eyelid drops…eye raised like bow…D ARJUNA…see d fish …nd put d arrow on dt bow…
30th Oct 2013 00:35am
30th Oct 2013 5:02am
7th Nov 2013 5:00am
Wow sweets this was a Great write!!
I'm impressed with your ink!!
Nice flow and a lil sad!!
Sir Lancelott
come visit sometime
I'm impressed with your ink!!
Nice flow and a lil sad!!
Sir Lancelott
come visit sometime
7th Nov 2013 7:17am
12th Nov 2013 11:23am
I could imagine this as an embrace I wouldn't ever
wanna be held captive by... Excellent imagery in this lady :)
wanna be held captive by... Excellent imagery in this lady :)
12th Nov 2013 12:01pm
19th Nov 2013 4:34am
Wow! What a deep write of empty emotion. My heart sank in reading this. Well expressed! :)
19th Nov 2013 8:53am
