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Inked
The paper like
a cold frigid bitch
refuses to spread her legs
and receive the ink
I want to spill insider her
prying her legs open
I engrave my thoughts
with a razor blade
carving my name
on her inner folds
yes Crimsin was here
pumping my fire
into her inner walls
making her cream
on the screen for all to see
loving the voyeurs
now trained to eagerly
spread eagle
when my pen needs to bleed
a cold frigid bitch
refuses to spread her legs
and receive the ink
I want to spill insider her
prying her legs open
I engrave my thoughts
with a razor blade
carving my name
on her inner folds
yes Crimsin was here
pumping my fire
into her inner walls
making her cream
on the screen for all to see
loving the voyeurs
now trained to eagerly
spread eagle
when my pen needs to bleed
Published 25th Oct 2013
| Edited 26th Oct 2013
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25th Oct 2013 9:09pm
25th Oct 2013 9:23pm
25th Oct 2013 9:50pm
you made me laugh with your comment :) thank you.. yeah a hack saw would be better but didn't want to make that pussy too bloody and mangled lol.. peace Crim
25th Oct 2013 9:53pm
Lady Crim, I just love the way your mind flips the script of ink, twisting the concept so beautifully! This was an awesome scribe luv!
25th Oct 2013 10:00pm
25th Oct 2013 11:21pm
Wowza! Well, color me inked. Gorgeously sharp & eloquent pen, bleeding the words...
26th Oct 2013 8:48am
25th Oct 2013 11:23pm
26th Oct 2013 8:49am
Me too Magdalena but when you write beautiful lady it's always pure magic.. thank you :) peace Crim
26th Oct 2013 1:42am
Certainly a very meaningful poem, some girls make me feel like shit. Particularly that sort of inconsiderate mean bitch!
Sometimes I feel like Ted Bundy, kill her in agony.
Sometimes I feel like Ted Bundy, kill her in agony.
26th Oct 2013 8:51am
26th Oct 2013 1:59am
26th Oct 2013 8:52am
thank you Kitty.. I was having writer's block bad and I hate that.. I guess we all go through it.. just got to side step it :) peace Crim
26th Oct 2013 6:20am
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27th Oct 2013 5:01am
When women's sexuality is imagined to be passive...wow!!
eroticly amusing. straight to my reading list!
eroticly amusing. straight to my reading list!
27th Oct 2013 6:26pm
Anonymous
28th Oct 2013 4:32pm
Crim,
What Atakti said!!! Loved the way you tamed this paper, frigid bitch! ; ) Enjoyed!!!
tornado
What Atakti said!!! Loved the way you tamed this paper, frigid bitch! ; ) Enjoyed!!!
tornado
28th Oct 2013 4:42pm
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29th Oct 2013 4:58am
Oooooo Gurl That Was HOTTTTT
TTTTttttsttttsssssss Burned My Folds - LMAO
Another Awesome Ink *Wink
XXX's
TTTTttttsttttsssssss Burned My Folds - LMAO
Another Awesome Ink *Wink
XXX's
29th Oct 2013 8:45am
thank you Tami made me smile wide with your comment.. peace beautiful lady.. peace Crim
Anonymous
4th Nov 2013 9:11pm
and a wonderful bleed this is Crim..just enough metaphorically to keep me in the loop..I'm terribly literal..and slow on the metaphorical uptake..lol Perfect for me!
Thanks
Thanks
4th Nov 2013 9:15pm
