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I can't
I can't write.
I can never get the words to flow
I'll say it again to make sure you know
that I can't write.
I can't sing.
My voice can never stay in key
I'll say it again to make sure you see
that I can't sing.
I can't love.
It's just not something I can feel
I'll say it again so you know that it's real
I can't love.
But I can lie.
If you've believed a word that I've said
I can tell that you haven't been using your head.
because I lied.
I can never get the words to flow
I'll say it again to make sure you know
that I can't write.
I can't sing.
My voice can never stay in key
I'll say it again to make sure you see
that I can't sing.
I can't love.
It's just not something I can feel
I'll say it again so you know that it's real
I can't love.
But I can lie.
If you've believed a word that I've said
I can tell that you haven't been using your head.
because I lied.
Published 22nd Sep 2009
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22nd Sep 2009 12:11pm
My goodness man, this is a very well done piece, the style, the impact...superb!!!!!
22nd Sep 2009 4:30pm
i love da end where you simply prove everyone else wrong!!!! :P
amazing style!!:):)
23rd Sep 2009 00:35am
...but i reckon you had no intention of writing a last verse like that until you got there...am i right??!
23rd Sep 2009 9:12am
Your right I didn't.
Congratulations on your perception.
What gave it away?
Congratulations on your perception.
What gave it away?
5th Nov 2009 3:03am
normally i'm not fond of being made an idiot, but in this case i am... i think that should let you know how much i like your piece
4th Sep 2011 1:47am
