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golden coryphees
pirouette through fall vespers
steps crackle applause
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pirouette through fall vespers
steps crackle applause
photo taken by author
Published 22nd Oct 2013
| Edited 10th Nov 2013
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22nd Oct 2013 8:49am
those last three words do a lot for you. all around, good job. (i thought you might've skipped a syllable at first but then i remembered i still pronounce 'pirouette' like a southerner (something like 'Peru')
23rd Oct 2013 10:59pm
Lol ... I understand the southerner thing ... I have a bit of Carolina geeche in me.
Thanks for the read and feedback ... Greatly appreciated.
LSP
Thanks for the read and feedback ... Greatly appreciated.
LSP
