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Far Away
You live so far away
I think about you every day
And as we talk
I can see
That this love will never be
You think I'm pretty
I think you're smart
But this will only
Tear us apart.
I think about you every day
And as we talk
I can see
That this love will never be
You think I'm pretty
I think you're smart
But this will only
Tear us apart.
Published 18th Jan 2011
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18th Jan 2011 9:44pm
Yes, the tragedy of far away love. You present it simply and beautifully--but I wanted to see the poem continue because I was rooting for the two of you to get together. Sometimes I just love happy endings.
19th Jan 2011 00:11am
Truth is we are now together. I showed him this poem and he loved it. Wish us luck!
