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Pops
I channeled you today
I felt you for a minute or two.
Two bodies and souls as one
swinging and swaying to the big bands.
Your music,that beat,that sound
piano popping,horns blasting,drums pounding.
Dancing around the place
your spirit filling me
arms swinging,feet moving,body shaking.
We were together again
it was free
it was exhilarating
it was wonderful
it was a "Sentimental Journey".
Come back anytime.
I felt you for a minute or two.
Two bodies and souls as one
swinging and swaying to the big bands.
Your music,that beat,that sound
piano popping,horns blasting,drums pounding.
Dancing around the place
your spirit filling me
arms swinging,feet moving,body shaking.
We were together again
it was free
it was exhilarating
it was wonderful
it was a "Sentimental Journey".
Come back anytime.
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Re: Pops
20th Oct 2013 5:23pm
This is my fav " two bodies and souls as one ",your poem inspire me:)Good write, Hash!
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Anonymous
20th Oct 2013 8:40pm
Loving this - one of your best.
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20th Oct 2013 10:39pm
Soo amazing how certain things re-connect us to those we cherish....re-establish our
'l i n k'--melding body to body, and soul to soul.
Such a tenderly lovely piece...inspirational ink, my Friend!
'l i n k'--melding body to body, and soul to soul.
Such a tenderly lovely piece...inspirational ink, my Friend!
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21st Oct 2013 2:38am
Amazing,dad loved Big Band music,I put it on every Sunday morning and we meld together...peace to you :)
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20th Oct 2013 11:17pm
Wonderful to feel that connection. An inspiring piece Hashman. Well written.
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Anonymous
22nd Oct 2013 3:10am
Beautiful and touching, Mr Hash you've outdone yourself with this one!
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25th Oct 2013 3:48pm
you conveyed so good, with warm words, your sentemental journey..thank you 4 sharing
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