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Lost Love
She echoed in his mind
always feeling her warm
voice in his ears
alone without her
missing her love
his heart aching for touch
craving for her as he weeps
always feeling her warm
voice in his ears
alone without her
missing her love
his heart aching for touch
craving for her as he weeps
Published 20th Oct 2013
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Anonymous
20th Oct 2013 10:43pm
This the kind of o that does it for me. Well done!
21st Oct 2013 1:07am
21st Oct 2013 1:27am
How did you know? :D This passage struck me most:
"always feeling her warm
voice in his ears"
I can feel it! Thanks Tommie!
"always feeling her warm
voice in his ears"
I can feel it! Thanks Tommie!
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Anonymous
11th Nov 2013 2:23am
Nice scribe Tommie, you captured so much with so few words. still, its a bitch covers it huh? lol
