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Maybe Yesterday
Call me up on a whim
I can't take a breath
because your voice chokes me up;
The light outside is growing dim
and your words could bring me death
that's me running out of luck.
I thought I said to stay away,
but I tend to forget things,
but I know I'm not that stupid.
Sometimes you tend to stray away
and you become something else,
Oh wait, what did I say?
**First verse; not edited. Just thought I'd share and get some feedback on it.
I can't take a breath
because your voice chokes me up;
The light outside is growing dim
and your words could bring me death
that's me running out of luck.
I thought I said to stay away,
but I tend to forget things,
but I know I'm not that stupid.
Sometimes you tend to stray away
and you become something else,
Oh wait, what did I say?
**First verse; not edited. Just thought I'd share and get some feedback on it.
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