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The Scream
The fragile mind
explodes inside
screaming "no more"
looking for a way out
banging around
like a bull in a china shop
wall to wall
eyeball to eyeball
a plea for mercy
a plea for help
a cry for sanity
gotta let go
gotta let go
no morE, NO more...NO MoRE!!!
explodes inside
screaming "no more"
looking for a way out
banging around
like a bull in a china shop
wall to wall
eyeball to eyeball
a plea for mercy
a plea for help
a cry for sanity
gotta let go
gotta let go
no morE, NO more...NO MoRE!!!
Published 17th Oct 2013
| Edited 11th Apr 2024
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17th Oct 2013 7:22pm
17th Oct 2013 9:50pm
17th Oct 2013 7:26pm
The 'just can't take it anymore/pain
& panic & fear' are all screaming to
be heard right here...so well expressed,
Hash...
& panic & fear' are all screaming to
be heard right here...so well expressed,
Hash...
17th Oct 2013 9:52pm
17th Oct 2013 8:02pm
17th Oct 2013 9:53pm
Anonymous
17th Oct 2013 8:12pm
Were you in the meeting this morning,too?
Seriously, though,I do know this feeling...
Seriously, though,I do know this feeling...
17th Oct 2013 9:57pm
17th Oct 2013 11:19pm
18th Oct 2013 2:16am
18th Oct 2013 00:53am
No more is a good word, if you need to get away from whatever 'more' you dislike...interesting read, Hashman.
18th Oct 2013 2:18am
18th Oct 2013 3:15am
18th Oct 2013 1:36am
Expressed with such sincerity of emotion, my friend.
The feelings of being trapped within the caliginous corners of the mind...the overwhelming emotions...the frustrated cries for help that go unanswered...I can so surely sympathize, and empathize, with this piece!
The feelings of being trapped within the caliginous corners of the mind...the overwhelming emotions...the frustrated cries for help that go unanswered...I can so surely sympathize, and empathize, with this piece!
18th Oct 2013 2:21am
Anonymous
18th Oct 2013 4:36am
That's how i feel sometimes too, not a good place to be, pretty powerful imagery you got there Mr. Hash.
18th Oct 2013 7:56pm
18th Oct 2013 1:02pm
NO MORE!!!
A tormented mind that's close to insanity yet not being allowed to fully reach that stage nor escape it.
Well-written scribe,Hash (:
A tormented mind that's close to insanity yet not being allowed to fully reach that stage nor escape it.
Well-written scribe,Hash (:
18th Oct 2013 7:59pm
You know Hyacinth sometimes we just reach that tipping point :)...thank you my lady.
18th Oct 2013 6:23pm
Holy molely! I could feel the tension! Yea it made me wanna scream! lol awesomely scribed bro.
18th Oct 2013 8:03pm
LOl...Holy moley Batman...thanks my brother,today we scream together :) (thanks)
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22nd Oct 2013 00:36am
