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Your eyes
I don't know if your eyes
Are really very very wise
But it is a true surprise
To discover as I improvise
A great dance to hypnotize
You to get that you vocalize
Perhaps I have to romanticize
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Re: Your eyes
Anonymous
14th Oct 2013 11:58pm
Awwwww, such sweetness. You are just so very ... French...
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Anonymous
15th Oct 2013 00:22am
Yes, do...
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15th Oct 2013 00:28am
Just a joke, because one time, when a guy told me "kind of french", it was an insult and another one told him : "please, keep quiet!".
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Anonymous
15th Oct 2013 2:50am
and the sentences all rhyme :)
very beautiful and lovely.
very beautiful and lovely.
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