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Shatter me
Kiss me
tell me You love me
gently stroke me
thought provoke me
let me touch You
feel Your strength
make me need You
inside my skin
Do You feel it
i guess not
i'm just Your toy
a slave to my own mind
aswell as Your will
The rope isn't as tight
as Your grip on my heart
When You fuck me
do You think of me
do You look into my eyes
and see me looking back
searching for the darkness
to take me to the light
or are You as blind as me
It's ok,You can hurt me
You can do whatever You please
i won't argue
i won't stop You
You own me
i'm not weak
i'm a surviver
But You can
Shatter me
tell me You love me
gently stroke me
thought provoke me
let me touch You
feel Your strength
make me need You
inside my skin
Do You feel it
i guess not
i'm just Your toy
a slave to my own mind
aswell as Your will
The rope isn't as tight
as Your grip on my heart
When You fuck me
do You think of me
do You look into my eyes
and see me looking back
searching for the darkness
to take me to the light
or are You as blind as me
It's ok,You can hurt me
You can do whatever You please
i won't argue
i won't stop You
You own me
i'm not weak
i'm a surviver
But You can
Shatter me
Published 12th Oct 2013
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12th Oct 2013 7:48am
Loved its meaning
About how it is
How you feel
With the human element
Of caution
You can shatter me
Roll play fantastic
If both happy
But set boundaries
Otherwise could consume
Every waking moment
From a personal point of view
Me and my partner are quite relaxed
About roll play
He knows what I like
More importantly
He knows when to stop
And that's as it is
I dont like being controlled
Ever
But
Hehe
He knows about my sensual side
My wants and needs
When we are alone
He flicks my switch
So who am I to say no
In those desired moments
About how it is
How you feel
With the human element
Of caution
You can shatter me
Roll play fantastic
If both happy
But set boundaries
Otherwise could consume
Every waking moment
From a personal point of view
Me and my partner are quite relaxed
About roll play
He knows what I like
More importantly
He knows when to stop
And that's as it is
I dont like being controlled
Ever
But
Hehe
He knows about my sensual side
My wants and needs
When we are alone
He flicks my switch
So who am I to say no
In those desired moments
12th Oct 2013 8:54am
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14th Nov 2013 2:30pm
Whn u write… When You fuck me
do You think of me
do You look into my eyes
and see me looking back
searching for the darkness
to take me to the light
or are You as blind as me …it seems u write ds piece when u were in distance frm ur master but closest with d sense…
do You think of me
do You look into my eyes
and see me looking back
searching for the darkness
to take me to the light
or are You as blind as me …it seems u write ds piece when u were in distance frm ur master but closest with d sense…
17th Nov 2013 4:37pm
"make me need You
inside my skin"
only a submissive could describe needing a man so much. Love it, speaks volumes to me.
inside my skin"
only a submissive could describe needing a man so much. Love it, speaks volumes to me.
17th Nov 2013 5:07pm
19th Nov 2013 11:22am
When You fuck me
do You think of me
do You look into my eyes
and see me looking back
searching for the darkness
to take me to the light
or are You as blind as me ....speechless when read...
do You think of me
do You look into my eyes
and see me looking back
searching for the darkness
to take me to the light
or are You as blind as me ....speechless when read...
19th Nov 2013 2:55pm
Anonymous
19th Nov 2013 9:00pm
Very powerful and thought provoking...
Favorite lines:thought provoke me
make me need You
inside my skin
i'm not weak
i'm a surviver
But You can
Shatter me
I see strength here along with
frality, but we are all in some
way like that...
Favorite lines:thought provoke me
make me need You
inside my skin
i'm not weak
i'm a surviver
But You can
Shatter me
I see strength here along with
frality, but we are all in some
way like that...
19th Nov 2013 9:39pm
Indeed we are all fragile...but strength in your own convictions are all you need.
Thankyou for your comment
Thankyou for your comment
21st Nov 2013 11:17pm
D/s mantra
do anything you want, but don't kill me so much that you shatter my mind, the very thing I gave you so completely.
Unbelievable honesty
Brilliant
do anything you want, but don't kill me so much that you shatter my mind, the very thing I gave you so completely.
Unbelievable honesty
Brilliant
24th Nov 2013 6:53am
