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Love Making
Another day in paradise-
Because I am in your arms,
Craving for your love,
Delighted being engaged,
In your own unique ways.
My heartiest acknowledgement to Mr. Heslopian and Phil Collins for inspiring me more than hundred percent to compose this one. More importantly I have loved this piece and it’s great to love yourself and your work. He he:-)
Because I am in your arms,
Craving for your love,
Delighted being engaged,
In your own unique ways.
My heartiest acknowledgement to Mr. Heslopian and Phil Collins for inspiring me more than hundred percent to compose this one. More importantly I have loved this piece and it’s great to love yourself and your work. He he:-)
Published 15th Jan 2011
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15th Jan 2011 5:09pm
sweet rhyming and even sweeter than honey lines!
"More importantly I have loved this piece and it’s great to love yourself and your work" i think it's what every poet craves deep down! im glad that you achieved in believing it!
"More importantly I have loved this piece and it’s great to love yourself and your work" i think it's what every poet craves deep down! im glad that you achieved in believing it!
17th Jan 2011 9:44am
Dear Ophie! This is one of the sweetest and best possible comments that a love poem can recieve in its category. I am grateful to you for this one. And of course I have used your courtesy word "craving" in this one. So I acknowledge you for the insight of this powerful vocabulary:-)
Anonymous
15th Jan 2011 6:04pm
I've always been fascinated by the phrase "making love," how it denotes the beautiful act of physically expressing care, tenderness and affection, and this simple little poem has renewed that interest. If this piece were a woman, it would be Greta Garbo. Smoking a cigarette and pouting at the lens. :D
17th Jan 2011 9:49am
As you can see it's all because of you Jack for running your beautiful and inspiring thread. In my recent times, some of my dearest works have resulted because of you. So while christening this one I only had you and your interests in my mind and I knew that you will like the title and go through it atleast once. And day by day you are making me larger, this time with your Greta Garbo reference:-p
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15th Jan 2011 10:23pm
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17th Jan 2011 12:35pm
Is it the size of the poem? Or the unique simplicity that goes with true love That is making me love this poem?
Maybe it's the ABCD and I.
Nice one.
Maybe it's the ABCD and I.
Nice one.
17th Jan 2011 12:40pm
You may think so Divine or like that A for Anando, B for Beloved, C for Confession, D for Deep Love & may be I for inspiration...I don't know but there are so many things within this 5 lines Divine...The more you explore, the more you will fall in love. Thank you so much for getting a pause to think for my work. Keep reading me dear:-)
22nd Jan 2011 7:45am
22nd Jan 2011 9:23am
Thank you so much Sunny. It really means a lot to hear some comment like this o this one. Because this one is so closer to my heart. Read ma other works dear:-)
