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I love her..
I love her more than what I can express,
I love her more than what I can imagine.
and when she speaks a word I don't know it feels she is giving me a hint
I don't know if she wants to hear it now, I'm afraid of everything that time brings
but I love her more than what I can write
this serenity is more pure than an angel's blue eyes
but I got no right to say it , I'm a man sunk in his sins
it will be no surprise if despair is what for me time springs
Im ready for all the scars
pain is too less for my heart
coz, I love her more than what I can bear
I love her even if my demise is clear..
I love her more than what I can imagine.
and when she speaks a word I don't know it feels she is giving me a hint
I don't know if she wants to hear it now, I'm afraid of everything that time brings
but I love her more than what I can write
this serenity is more pure than an angel's blue eyes
but I got no right to say it , I'm a man sunk in his sins
it will be no surprise if despair is what for me time springs
Im ready for all the scars
pain is too less for my heart
coz, I love her more than what I can bear
I love her even if my demise is clear..
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Anonymous
10th Oct 2013 3:19pm
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10th Oct 2013 4:48pm
thank you Gabriel..I'm really glad that u liked it..thanks for the read m comment....
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10th Oct 2013 3:21pm
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10th Oct 2013 4:50pm
thank you shyfairy ..your comments makes feel good..thanks again...appreciate it..
Re: I love her..
11th Oct 2013 5:39pm
its not a problem...we all live a busy life....
as long as you read my shit and give your views on it honestly I'm glad my friend...
thank u so much...
as long as you read my shit and give your views on it honestly I'm glad my friend...
thank u so much...
Re: I love her..
12th Oct 2013 00:52am
Thought provoking write. There seems to be some peril involved in loving her that the reader can't fully see? Reminds me of the Bee Gees song, "I've Just Got To Get A Message To You".
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12th Oct 2013 5:32am
Re: I love her..
12th Oct 2013 5:06am
Hey you said you didn't know how to express what you feel
Right? Well trust me dude, it was expressed PERFECTLY... Nice job my man :)
Right? Well trust me dude, it was expressed PERFECTLY... Nice job my man :)
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4th Nov 2013 8:06pm
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4th Nov 2013 8:12pm
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21st Nov 2013 2:00am
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27th Dec 2013 1:12pm
I'm a dead sucker for a love poem Mr CK. And this is heartfelt Sir. Sorrow, longing, having to reign yourself in to use simple words that fall short of what you really feel. That's love my friend. Lovely ink Sir. Thank you.
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Re: I love her..
27th Dec 2013 7:43pm
thank u twitch for giving this piece a read..
n pls don't call me sir.
ur visit is much appreciated ..
n pls don't call me sir.
ur visit is much appreciated ..