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replay the terror
push that blade into my wrist, watch it sink deeper, watch the blood pour
push that blade into my wrist, watch it sink deeper, watch the blood pour
reminisce this scene, cry some more, cry over nothing
reminisce this scene, cry some more, cry over nothing
pathetic child, it's what you think you are, it's what you see you are
pathetic child, it's what you think you are, it's what you see you are
your fate is mine, now you die, now you say it's over
your fate is mine, now you die, now you say it's over
death is here, pale and cold and lifeless, pale and cold and dead
death is here, pale and cold and lifeless, pale and cold and dead
they didn't see your pain, they didn't try to understand, the didn't try
they didn't see your pain, they didn't try to understand, the didn't try
push that blade into my wrist, watch it sink deeper, watch the blood pour
push that blade into my wrist, watch it sink deeper, watch the blood pour
WATCH THE BLOOD POUR!
push that blade into my wrist, watch it sink deeper, watch the blood pour
reminisce this scene, cry some more, cry over nothing
reminisce this scene, cry some more, cry over nothing
pathetic child, it's what you think you are, it's what you see you are
pathetic child, it's what you think you are, it's what you see you are
your fate is mine, now you die, now you say it's over
your fate is mine, now you die, now you say it's over
death is here, pale and cold and lifeless, pale and cold and dead
death is here, pale and cold and lifeless, pale and cold and dead
they didn't see your pain, they didn't try to understand, the didn't try
they didn't see your pain, they didn't try to understand, the didn't try
push that blade into my wrist, watch it sink deeper, watch the blood pour
push that blade into my wrist, watch it sink deeper, watch the blood pour
WATCH THE BLOOD POUR!
Published 13th Jan 2011
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21st Jan 2011 2:11am
this poem has a very saddening tone to it... and its daunting the imagery which dwells in the depth of your lines. powerful stuff
21st Jan 2011 10:16am
yes i wrote this when i was on the brink of a relapse. but i didn't do anything except write this repetitive poem haha :) xx
20th Sep 2011 11:18pm
at first i was like wtf with the repeating but i went with it and broke through a barier. i love it and i hope you are better.
23rd Sep 2011 5:47pm
