deepundergroundpoetry.com
Shelf x-planet ore (e) ....[Sean Connery's accent]
I'm terrible at times...
So,
I try and salvage what verve remains
after curbing the chaos of my thoughts
to make up for the atrocity
that is me.
Then, I'm not so terrible.
So,
I try and salvage what verve remains
after curbing the chaos of my thoughts
to make up for the atrocity
that is me.
Then, I'm not so terrible.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 8
reading list entries 0
comments 18
reads 978
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re: Shelf x-planet ore (e) ....[Sean Connery's accent]
5th Oct 2013 2:54pm
huh:) the destructive plot works out well..atleast for me..liked those words used (terrible, chaos, atrocity) right from start to end, as if keeping up the terri-bility growing inspite of salvage n its final non-affirmation
the topic smelt good, but didnt get that e in paranthesis, is it for the accent-sake?
different n a quick-sharp reasoning write in unreasonably terrible times:
the topic smelt good, but didnt get that e in paranthesis, is it for the accent-sake?
different n a quick-sharp reasoning write in unreasonably terrible times:
1
re: Re: Shelf x-planet ore (e) ....[Sean Connery's accent]
5th Oct 2013 7:15pm
copyright (c) = ee (e)
how would it sound if Sean Connery said "self explanatory"? lol
yes well, I think I'm going to blame that on family guy.
how would it sound if Sean Connery said "self explanatory"? lol
yes well, I think I'm going to blame that on family guy.
Re: Shelf x-planet ore (e) ....[Sean Connery's accent]
5th Oct 2013 6:49pm
Sean Connery's accent makes terrible so inviting though. I gotta' crush on that white-haired man...
1
re: Re: Shelf x-planet ore (e) ....[Sean Connery's accent]
5th Oct 2013 7:17pm
re: re: Re: Shelf x-planet ore (e) ....[Sean Connery's accent]
5th Oct 2013 7:29pm
Well shit-fire!! I blame my weak comprehension on Hennessey and those damn straw.beer.rita drinks last night...
1
re: Re: Shelf x-planet ore (e) ....[Sean Connery's accent]
7th Oct 2013 1:34pm
Lol...thought I was his only crush!! lol--yeah putting his name in the title...mmmm...ok back to my focus...
1
re: re: re: Re: Shelf x-planet ore (e) ....[Sean Connery's accent]
re: re: Re: Shelf x-planet ore (e) ....[Sean Connery's accent]
10th Oct 2013 9:46am
Re: Shelf x-planet ore (e) ....[Sean Connery's accent]
Anonymous
6th Oct 2013 00:53am
Cute....
1
re: Re: Shelf x-planet ore (e) ....[Sean Connery's accent]
10th Oct 2013 9:41am
Re: Shelf x-planet ore (e) ....[Sean Connery's accent]
6th Oct 2013 4:02am
Damn...(spitting out my marshmallows)...I thought the whole thing was to read in such a way...
Deny if You wish-I dig the Wit-Excellence Sir!!!
Deny if You wish-I dig the Wit-Excellence Sir!!!
2
re: Re: Shelf x-planet ore (e) ....[Sean Connery's accent]
10th Oct 2013 9:42am
Re: Shelf x-planet ore (e) ....[Sean Connery's accent]
6th Oct 2013 6:52am
re: Re: Shelf x-planet ore (e) ....[Sean Connery's accent]
10th Oct 2013 9:43am
Re: Shelf x-planet ore (e) ....[Sean Connery's accent]
11th Oct 2013 10:38pm
hmmmm very smart n creative .... but y self explanatory to be read in his accent...? just a bit curious.. lol..
cyanide...
cyanide...
1
re: Re: Shelf x-planet ore (e) ....[Sean Connery's accent]
13th Oct 2013 00:35am
Re: Shelf x-planet ore (e) ....[Sean Connery's accent]
14th Oct 2013 11:14am
re: Re: Shelf x-planet ore (e) ....[Sean Connery's accent]
15th Oct 2013 9:52am