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The Stars Give Me Ease
Lost in the mist
not understanding my pain
so consuming this hurt
wrapping it's arms around me
I cry to no avail
numbness shrouds me no more
feeling all things great and small
I seek the light but am left in the shadows
darkness of depression envelopes me
sigh I know tomorrow will be another day
getting to my feet after the breath
has been knocked from me
seeking solace amongst the stars
I project myself there
above the heavy mist
away from the darkness
the lights in the cosmos
sparkle and dance
embracing them now
my soul takes leave
they tenderly kiss my being
in the ether my feet
no longer tethered to the ground
my heart is at ease
not understanding my pain
so consuming this hurt
wrapping it's arms around me
I cry to no avail
numbness shrouds me no more
feeling all things great and small
I seek the light but am left in the shadows
darkness of depression envelopes me
sigh I know tomorrow will be another day
getting to my feet after the breath
has been knocked from me
seeking solace amongst the stars
I project myself there
above the heavy mist
away from the darkness
the lights in the cosmos
sparkle and dance
embracing them now
my soul takes leave
they tenderly kiss my being
in the ether my feet
no longer tethered to the ground
my heart is at ease
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Re: The Stars Give Me Ease
Anonymous
1st Oct 2013 4:38pm
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re: Re: The Stars Give Me Ease
1st Oct 2013 4:51pm
Thank you Theo i'm back on Earth your comment gave me peace thank you :) Brenda
Re: The Stars Give Me Ease
Anonymous
1st Oct 2013 5:12pm
This is gorgeously written, the notes of sadness and search for relief, accepting, finding so well portrayed.
Brenda this is one beautiful poem!
Brenda this is one beautiful poem!
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re: Re: The Stars Give Me Ease
1st Oct 2013 5:17pm
Re: The Stars Give Me Ease
Anonymous
1st Oct 2013 8:30pm
Sometimes we have to lose ourselves to find ourselves - this does that beautifully.
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re: Re: The Stars Give Me Ease
1st Oct 2013 8:42pm
thank you Petit sigh you are right losing myself amongst the stars I feel the light.. peace Brenda :)
Re: The Stars Give Me Ease
1st Oct 2013 10:27pm
This is soooooooooo beautiful My Lovely Crim....
it leaves me yearning for the cosmos right by your side!
XOXO
Fire
it leaves me yearning for the cosmos right by your side!
XOXO
Fire
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re: Re: The Stars Give Me Ease
Thank you dear Fire here we are one in the cosmos.. peace to you beautiful lady.. Brenda
Re: The Stars Give Me Ease
I have felt the same way. Even when everything is terrible there's still the sky and the stars above.
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re: Re: The Stars Give Me Ease
2nd Oct 2013 7:56pm
thank you No1 for the read and understanding yes we always have the stars and the cosmos to retreat to no matter what.. peace Brenda
Re: The Stars Give Me Ease
2nd Oct 2013 3:01am
Such Beauty Crim- we should always be able to reach and share within-I use to lay for hours as a younger man in an open field...roll one up and just drift to the Beauty-Absolute Awesome Ink!!!
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re: Re: The Stars Give Me Ease
2nd Oct 2013 7:57pm
Thank Soul.. you made me smile with your comment about rolling on up and just drift to the beauty.. peace Crim
Re: The Stars Give Me Ease
2nd Oct 2013 3:06am
I guess that is what I need to do.....
I am feeling a bit depressed myself today....
I am feeling a bit depressed myself today....
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re: Re: The Stars Give Me Ease
2nd Oct 2013 7:58pm
Hugs Scarlet.. depression sucks.. drift to the cosmos now lovely one.. peace Crim
Re: The Stars Give Me Ease
Anonymous
2nd Oct 2013 3:30am
A beautiful poem that demonstrates the depth and breadth of your talent.
A pleasure to read
Peace
Kitty
A pleasure to read
Peace
Kitty
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2nd Oct 2013 7:59pm
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