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Siren's Song
if i was a
Siren, i would
lure you in
with the sweetest
of melodies
a melody that
would seduce
your soul
one that would
let your mind
wander off with
blind ambition
i would make
you mine with
a single note
a note that
would make you
hand over the
keys to your
heart and lead
me to the secret
location of your
hidden treasure
. . .
Your love
Siren, i would
lure you in
with the sweetest
of melodies
a melody that
would seduce
your soul
one that would
let your mind
wander off with
blind ambition
i would make
you mine with
a single note
a note that
would make you
hand over the
keys to your
heart and lead
me to the secret
location of your
hidden treasure
. . .
Your love
Published 29th Sep 2013
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Anonymous
29th Sep 2013 9:34pm
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29th Sep 2013 10:20pm
Isn't it ironic how I can only write such after the break-up? Lol
Thank you,Theo xo
Thank you,Theo xo
Anonymous
29th Sep 2013 9:56pm
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29th Sep 2013 10:21pm
29th Sep 2013 10:04pm
this beautiful music you wrote with your sirens call lulled me into a tranquil sense of peace.. so beautiful.. thank you Crim
29th Sep 2013 10:22pm
Anonymous
30th Sep 2013 1:03am
So lovely and i love the shape, making us yearn for more.
well done, i really liked this clever little poem.
well done, i really liked this clever little poem.
30th Sep 2013 1:16am
30th Sep 2013 5:09am
Aaaaawwww sooooooko sweetly inked! Made lil ole heart skip a beat! :) talented u are my sweetness :)
30th Sep 2013 2:21pm
30th Sep 2013 7:07am
This is simply gorgeous Cinth. I think its often easy to remember and yearn for love after we've let it go.
30th Sep 2013 2:21pm
Anonymous
30th Sep 2013 5:30pm
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1st Oct 2013 5:47am
Well,I wanted a sort of random structure because I was picturing each line floating like a music note. Not sure if it worked out though,but oh well...
Thank you,Michael (:
Thank you,Michael (:
2nd Oct 2013 2:54am
I think you are a siren...
every word lured me in if i had a secret treasure you would have got it lol
this was a great read
every word lured me in if i had a secret treasure you would have got it lol
this was a great read
2nd Oct 2013 10:58am
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8th Oct 2013 2:28am
"For we know all that is in Troy caught in the unstopped ear" (Ezra Pound).
The Sirens can be dangerous, but I enjoy your sweet conveyance. Not all of them are heartless carnivores. I am glad to read you.
The Sirens can be dangerous, but I enjoy your sweet conveyance. Not all of them are heartless carnivores. I am glad to read you.
8th Oct 2013 1:01pm
They are actually one of the mythical creatures that i fancy. Thank you for taking the time to read me,Butcher (:
