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The Least of My Existence-Please Get Off Your Phone
You know of my reflection
Not the inflection of my voice
but what am I to do?
I try, and I pry at that
front door
but some poor little girl
wont let me through
says I need some pass
Sixteen hole punches!
To go the bunnies way!
I mean geeze...
Its a meet + greet
not a meet + meat
Now he questions my existence
and...honesty
It hurts but I'm to blame
Although, being all mysterious and shit
was not intended
Why cant you just let it go?
How about call me on the phone? :DDD
No, too awkward for you.
Well, dont be so butthurt.
My birthday is December 20th
Once I get my card punched
we might go the bunnies way
Not the inflection of my voice
but what am I to do?
I try, and I pry at that
front door
but some poor little girl
wont let me through
says I need some pass
Sixteen hole punches!
To go the bunnies way!
I mean geeze...
Its a meet + greet
not a meet + meat
Now he questions my existence
and...honesty
It hurts but I'm to blame
Although, being all mysterious and shit
was not intended
Why cant you just let it go?
How about call me on the phone? :DDD
No, too awkward for you.
Well, dont be so butthurt.
My birthday is December 20th
Once I get my card punched
we might go the bunnies way
Published 29th Sep 2013
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2nd Oct 2013 10:43pm
2nd Oct 2013 11:00pm
3rd Oct 2013 3:10am
hope you are not in a rush though .....
some things are worth the wait...........
although you don't know the difference until
you have something to compare it too.......
21st Oct 2013 5:44am
nice and raw. the first two lines are both aesthetically pleasing and pretty deep; great start! love the little specific details (girl at the door, 16 punches on a punch card, bunnies way), even though i have to struggle to make sense of some of them (probably an age difference thing!).
21st Oct 2013 12:13pm
Really appreciate the comment. I find it funny because it doesn't appear sexual in the least but you think and then you "think" then your like "oh wow, -this- is what she means" haha. It takes a pervert at heart to understand haha. Thanks for readin sweets.
