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What I wanna do...
I wanna kiss a stain
into your memory bank
n' place it under under lock n' key
soon you're gonna find out
there will never be, another lover
more passionate than me
so step into these arms
so safe n' secure,
feel the burn of this desire
come on, suckle on the magic
of a heated soul
juss blazing like a raging fire
I'll promise you whatever
bringin' your soul utter joy, n' happiness
understand, that it is your heart's words
that's rocketed me into total blissfulness
yet, if you're concerned
that I'm all about the physical
it is truly, unduly found
I heard your heart speaking
thru your eyes, n' the sight
sends me heaven bound
see now I'm all aglow
because like a surgeon, you've opened up this heart
so findin' your tenderness has sewn together
what was once torn completely apart
baby as I lie down next to your picture
depicting our voyage to outterspace
I wonder, will you sing me into dream's lullabye
as I exhale in tiny renmnants,
of how loving you, sweetly tastes...
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27th Sep 2013 12:31pm
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27th Sep 2013 11:20pm
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27th Sep 2013 12:32pm
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27th Sep 2013 11:22pm
Well I wish you luck my friend, I'm still searching myself lol
I know I am... But sure can't seem to find one lol
Appreciate you much :)
I know I am... But sure can't seem to find one lol
Appreciate you much :)
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27th Sep 2013 12:44pm
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27th Sep 2013 11:25pm
Aaaawww just the first two huh? Dang, guess I should scrap it
n start over huh? lol... Thank u my dear, grateful for ur support always :)
n start over huh? lol... Thank u my dear, grateful for ur support always :)
Re: What I wanna do...
27th Sep 2013 1:28pm
"I wanna kiss a stain
into your memory bank
n' place it under under lock n' key "
Ahhh Lovely Scribe Poetik..Well Done Sir!!!
into your memory bank
n' place it under under lock n' key "
Ahhh Lovely Scribe Poetik..Well Done Sir!!!
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re: Re: What I wanna do...
27th Sep 2013 11:29pm
So flattered u leave me my sweetness! Thank u so so much, I'm grateful to you til the end :)
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Anonymous
27th Sep 2013 1:48pm
sweet and lovely..............
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27th Sep 2013 11:24pm
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27th Sep 2013 11:36pm
hey my friend, how's it going? Wonderful
To see you back n thank u as always for ur kindness
To see you back n thank u as always for ur kindness
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Anonymous
28th Sep 2013 1:05am
Romantic to the max, your pen oozing with love PIKM, excellent scribe, i love it.
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28th Sep 2013 1:10am
Mmmmm ur words have me feeling a lil tipsy
Vee, mmmuuuaaahhh! Thank u so much my sweet one :)
Vee, mmmuuuaaahhh! Thank u so much my sweet one :)
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28th Sep 2013 2:01am
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28th Sep 2013 3:50am
Thanks bro. lol I guess that's means I'm also
super gullible too lol... Truly appreciate you always!
super gullible too lol... Truly appreciate you always!
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Anonymous
18th Oct 2013 2:24pm
ha! Bro yes!! that means you're super gullible LOL
the fact that you wrote this and I'm commenting instead of the other way round..? which could be! means I'm as easily blinded by love as you..we must be brothers of different mothers..lol
Sweet Scribe Bro Poe :)
the fact that you wrote this and I'm commenting instead of the other way round..? which could be! means I'm as easily blinded by love as you..we must be brothers of different mothers..lol
Sweet Scribe Bro Poe :)
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18th Oct 2013 2:55pm
Lol THAT we are bro! lol Otha's from mothas! Whoop there we is! lol thanks so much bro. For this n everything you've said
N the laughs n the fav. add... Truly, deeply appreciate that n you :)
N the laughs n the fav. add... Truly, deeply appreciate that n you :)