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You know, We could...
We could...
have a love
so fair,
whether or not
we'd dare
to be there...
in the moment
when we kissed
pressed...
to such depths
alien, in our bliss
the elixir
of our breaths
escapes the confines
of our extra sensories...
you n' me
we could
have a love...
bound...
my word
is bond
we'd bond
together,
like a super nova
attached...
to it's destiny
I know,
it's a simple fantasy
but, we...
could have a love
yea...you n' me...
have a love
so fair,
whether or not
we'd dare
to be there...
in the moment
when we kissed
pressed...
to such depths
alien, in our bliss
the elixir
of our breaths
escapes the confines
of our extra sensories...
you n' me
we could
have a love...
bound...
my word
is bond
we'd bond
together,
like a super nova
attached...
to it's destiny
I know,
it's a simple fantasy
but, we...
could have a love
yea...you n' me...
Published 25th Sep 2013
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25th Sep 2013 12:49pm
25th Sep 2013 1:33pm
25th Sep 2013 1:51pm
25th Sep 2013 2:36pm
aaaaawwww well gosh, i'm so happy you enjoyed, thank you for this lovely comment n your continued support always :)
Anonymous
25th Sep 2013 2:49pm
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26th Sep 2013 1:49pm
25th Sep 2013 5:03pm
Yeah the mind can do soo many things if only we let it, blur the lines of fantasy and real life if only a little while.
Red
Red
26th Sep 2013 1:51pm
Yup, I agree 100 Red, u SAGE u! :) thanks a bunch I appreciate you always :)
25th Sep 2013 5:19pm
Hello this is so fresh and pure. Love it and the most beautiful lines are.
we'd bond
together,
like a super nova
attached...
Tyvm syn.
we'd bond
together,
like a super nova
attached...
Tyvm syn.
27th Sep 2013 3:21am
Ur so welcome, but it is I who thanks you! I appreciate ur time n thoughts on my ink :)
25th Sep 2013 5:36pm
27th Sep 2013 11:01am
so sweet of you to say that, i thank you my the bottom of my heart... appreciate you... :)
25th Sep 2013 7:22pm
27th Sep 2013 11:02am
thanks my friend, yea looks like that's all i will ever have...appreciate you so much my sweetie... :)
27th Sep 2013 11:32am
27th Sep 2013 11:16pm
Yea, who says I'm expecting it? Lol
I'm just being realistic vs my normal
hopeful n dreamy ways lol
I'm just being realistic vs my normal
hopeful n dreamy ways lol
Anonymous
25th Sep 2013 9:18pm
ohh PIKM, I like the structure, very tight and with wealth of emotions extremely well expressed.
Very sweet and lovely.
Very sweet and lovely.
27th Sep 2013 11:03am
flattered by your sweet words lady...always, i'm so grateful for the support... :)
Anonymous
25th Sep 2013 10:12pm
the elixir
of our breaths
escapes the confines
of our extra sensories...
Enjoyed the read, Poetikmind. Sweet, lovely poetics! :-)
Peace
Carlene
of our breaths
escapes the confines
of our extra sensories...
Enjoyed the read, Poetikmind. Sweet, lovely poetics! :-)
Peace
Carlene
27th Sep 2013 11:04am
Anonymous
25th Sep 2013 10:29pm
Just love this...cute, like not so sure
of the outcome, BUT putting yourself
out there anyway:)
of the outcome, BUT putting yourself
out there anyway:)
27th Sep 2013 11:05am
thank you! i'm very pleased you liked n truly grateful for your time n words... :)
Anonymous
26th Sep 2013 4:33pm
A very sweet and very lyrical write...
If set to music....it would be "catchy"
Enjoyed/Good work
Peace
Kitty
If set to music....it would be "catchy"
Enjoyed/Good work
Peace
Kitty
27th Sep 2013 11:07am
my sweet Kitty, you're so adorable! it'd be "catchy" with music huh? well i need to see if i could find something to match it to... stay tuned l.o.l... thank u my dear, appreciate you... :)
27th Sep 2013 4:23am
27th Sep 2013 11:09am
i'm wondering bout that too! like uhm you're reaaallly starting to slip woman...LMAO juss kidding
of course! l.o.l. you're the bestest in da westest lady! ...muah! always for raining on my pages ur love... :)
of course! l.o.l. you're the bestest in da westest lady! ...muah! always for raining on my pages ur love... :)
27th Sep 2013 6:41pm
27th Sep 2013 11:18pm
25th Oct 2013 00:44am
This is perfect, from the start to end I didn't want to stop reading. xo
25th Oct 2013 2:19am
I feel special reading ur special sweet sweet praise! Thank u so much my dear sweetheart :)
