Fire and Rain

Are you standing outside his
house in this rain-storm TL?

He'd better open-up quickly
and let you in before some
other lucky guy gets to you
first.

I enjoyed this: it was short
but vivid.


   Thanks for this gem... Pan

Not yet Pan... ;)

Thank you kindly, I always appreciate your comments ;))

Thank you wrangler

I like the image...works well with the poem. I thought this was a follow-up of "Insane Asylum." JT wrote "Fire & Rain" while in an asylum...after a fellow patient and friend died.

Thank you osobeto...there will be more creepy ones to come!I'll have to check JT's fire & rain out.

A short write but puts much in the imagination.  Sum it up as warmth at the end of the cold tunnel.

Thank you kindly SS :)

The one thing you consistently do is
express a heart full of passion, which I love
n even though this is short, it ain't short on passion! :)
Nicely done TL. :)

Thank you very much Poet...I appreciate your wonderful comment... ;)

I agree with Poetikmind !! Full of passion :)

Thank you Brinda :)

Yin and yang, light and dark, happiness and sorrow, love and heartbreak, passion and...unrequited passion. This poem speaks all of these things in so few words. Very much enjoyed!

I appreciate you reading and commenting M ;)