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the feelings i have and had
the days i have had,
the times you people have made me feel so real
the one thing i must do, is go to Texas to see one person
this is something i write everyday.
maybe the someone will make me feel so much better.
its been a while for me to write, but its time to let it out
losing my dad was hard, but losing my little brother is the worse thing that happened.
they meant the world to me and now they are gone forever, until im up there with them
love you the most my boys.
i will travel around the world for you both.
the times you people have made me feel so real
the one thing i must do, is go to Texas to see one person
this is something i write everyday.
maybe the someone will make me feel so much better.
its been a while for me to write, but its time to let it out
losing my dad was hard, but losing my little brother is the worse thing that happened.
they meant the world to me and now they are gone forever, until im up there with them
love you the most my boys.
i will travel around the world for you both.
Published 21st Sep 2013
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22nd Sep 2013 12:49pm
I'm sorry to hear about what happened to your dad and brother. Its a terrible sorrow to bear. If you ever need someone to talk to, I'm here for a fellow poet. Definitely a heartfelt work Lauren
23rd Sep 2013 00:04am
23rd Sep 2013 00:10am
Nice that there is someone you want to see in Texas---my experiences in that state made me think most Texans are pretty strange. But then my parents grew up there and were so happy to get out.
Indeed I am convinced that losing a family member who is younger is one of the toughest things for a family to deal with.
Indeed I am convinced that losing a family member who is younger is one of the toughest things for a family to deal with.
23rd Sep 2013 00:12am
23rd Sep 2013 00:21am
1st Nov 2013 8:23am
I suggest you go enjoy that fine Tejas weather & atmosphere for your father & brother. I had some great times there. Jazzmanor is correct in his observation...Texans are a pretty strange bunch. It's always fun to get 'em started. Condolences for your loss. That's tough. Head to Tejas!
~puts on one of his many ZZ Top records~
~puts on one of his many ZZ Top records~
