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Empty
Wanting something so bad
when we get it we want
something else,
opening doors to find
emptiness,
filling up on nothing but
false hope,
lies can be so beautiful
but still a lie
when we get it we want
something else,
opening doors to find
emptiness,
filling up on nothing but
false hope,
lies can be so beautiful
but still a lie
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19th Sep 2013 1:16pm
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19th Sep 2013 2:27pm
Remembering the key to getting everything we want, miss. Not wanting very much.
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Re: Empty
19th Sep 2013 2:53pm
This is a very true and
insightful scribe TL.
Never satisfied.
Desires never quenched.
Good write... Pan
insightful scribe TL.
Never satisfied.
Desires never quenched.
Good write... Pan
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19th Sep 2013 4:18pm
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19th Sep 2013 4:09pm
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Anonymous
19th Sep 2013 4:24pm
Truth, the only thing in the world that is constant and unwavering. You cannot change it.
So the question behind question is what do you really want?
WF
So the question behind question is what do you really want?
WF

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19th Sep 2013 5:09pm
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Anonymous
19th Sep 2013 5:14pm
Damn human nature! You've written truth about the lies with which we deceive ourselves. Great job...and I ain't lying :)

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20th Sep 2013 3:30am
I love this. How many times have we pushed aside what we ask for because we now want something more...definitely something I struggle with. Thank you for this!
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20th Sep 2013 4:51am