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Its yours to keep
You have made a game
Of playing with my emotions..
one I will never win
I would have followed you anywhere
fought your battles,
been your strength when you needed,
Listened to you without end
You were my best friend
I'm not sure where I went wrong
Now I'm left to start again
You can keep whats left of me
I don't want it anymore
Of playing with my emotions..
one I will never win
I would have followed you anywhere
fought your battles,
been your strength when you needed,
Listened to you without end
You were my best friend
I'm not sure where I went wrong
Now I'm left to start again
You can keep whats left of me
I don't want it anymore
Published 18th Sep 2013
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Anonymous
18th Sep 2013 7:16pm
Nothing wrong with weeding out, i say, more space to let new ppl with new experience in...:)
18th Sep 2013 7:19pm
Very true. But I'm not sure I have it in me to let anyone get that close again.
Anonymous
18th Sep 2013 7:23pm
well i can totally relate to you and i got my issues also about trust and trusting new ppl to enter my life. I let pieces of myself out in small doses.
18th Sep 2013 7:27pm
Its not easy for me to trust, so when its thrown back at me like it was, it just gets harder. As you probably know.
Anonymous
18th Sep 2013 7:35pm
There's a saying 'what doesn't break you, makes you stronger' but there's an alternate saying, 'what doesn't break you, makes you stranger' in a sense that we change, we'll never be the same, innocence gone!
18th Sep 2013 7:40pm
I could probably stand to be a little stronger. I try to learn from my mistakes, even if it does take a time or two. And who knows, maybe adding some more strangeness to my life will be good for me.
18th Sep 2013 7:48pm
Life will be good!! Enjoyed your write--leaving the old--you know have room for the new!!
18th Sep 2013 8:33pm
18th Sep 2013 11:03pm
A very heart felt write. I know it is hard to let people in, but I do know there are some good people out there.
18th Sep 2013 11:28pm
Thank you. There are some nice people out there. I just can't seem to find one to be nice to me.
19th Sep 2013 2:32am
We are definitely two of a kind...especially at this very moment. You're a good person and you deserve the best..one that doesn't jank you around. (Maybe I should listen to my own advice, lol)...I really liked this.
19th Sep 2013 4:57am
Hey lady. We definitely have some common ground. And yes you need to listen to your own advice. But I already told you that earlier. Thank you for listening to me earlier.
19th Sep 2013 1:37pm
19th Sep 2013 2:44pm
Any time, you know that.
And we are back to that I see..... well when you learn to take your own advice I won't have to be so mature.
And we are back to that I see..... well when you learn to take your own advice I won't have to be so mature.
