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He tells me
He tells me to wait;
To lay still and be
patient.
He tells me everything
In colourful detail;
Of how I will feel;
How it's going to be,
for us and me.
He tells me to wait
Until the lace wets
my hidden appetite
revealed.
Only then will he say,
Come with me
Feel everything.
To lay still and be
patient.
He tells me everything
In colourful detail;
Of how I will feel;
How it's going to be,
for us and me.
He tells me to wait
Until the lace wets
my hidden appetite
revealed.
Only then will he say,
Come with me
Feel everything.
Published 17th Sep 2013
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17th Sep 2013 2:03pm
17th Sep 2013 2:22pm
17th Sep 2013 2:50pm
17th Sep 2013 2:59pm
thank you Lsp xD
yes agreed a little dash of sensual added
a watched pot never boils but in this case I beg to differ! hehe
yes agreed a little dash of sensual added
a watched pot never boils but in this case I beg to differ! hehe
Anonymous
17th Sep 2013 3:52pm
I call this erotica with grace, excellent penmanship Rose, well done!
17th Sep 2013 4:06pm
17th Sep 2013 6:21pm
17th Sep 2013 7:16pm
Yes agreed with you
I have, as my erotic past on Dup shows covered all
Aspects of erotica
But its the subtle hint not the full on descriptive that I
Always come home to first
Let the reader decide
Let them do the imaginative work
xD
I have, as my erotic past on Dup shows covered all
Aspects of erotica
But its the subtle hint not the full on descriptive that I
Always come home to first
Let the reader decide
Let them do the imaginative work
xD
21st Sep 2013 5:24pm
21st Sep 2013 5:28pm
