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Gone
Her coldness was her gift
gone in the dark covered
by past time that ticked
in the whipping wind of
the naked tree branches
doing circles around the
warmth of flesh sending
shivers up their spines
while gasping noises
escaped trembling mouths
all she ever wanted was
a true companion to give
her their endless passion
never finding the one that
could she burst into a loveless
white cloud of emptiness
gaining nothing at all but
losing everything she ever
wanted for herself
gone in the dark covered
by past time that ticked
in the whipping wind of
the naked tree branches
doing circles around the
warmth of flesh sending
shivers up their spines
while gasping noises
escaped trembling mouths
all she ever wanted was
a true companion to give
her their endless passion
never finding the one that
could she burst into a loveless
white cloud of emptiness
gaining nothing at all but
losing everything she ever
wanted for herself
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Anonymous
17th Sep 2013 00:33am
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17th Sep 2013 1:23am
Dieing from a broken heart...never being loved the way one truly wants, painfully tragic and slow death, I'm sure!Thanks Theo!
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17th Sep 2013 1:31am
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Anonymous
17th Sep 2013 1:20am
A well written ghost story...you do have a haunted pen lately :D

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17th Sep 2013 1:25am
I think it's in the air Osobeto...enjoying the creepy thoughts that come to my mind ...thanks for reading ;)
Re: Gone
Anonymous
17th Sep 2013 4:55am
I get it. Very relatable for me. Thanks for sharing....

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17th Sep 2013 1:41pm
Re: Gone
17th Sep 2013 5:02am
This sounds so much like me n my life
Never having to kind of love I need, want
Dying as a result... Deeply emotive, sad ink lady
Never having to kind of love I need, want
Dying as a result... Deeply emotive, sad ink lady
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Anonymous
17th Sep 2013 2:34pm
Nicely done tl...stay alert stay alive!
Strider
Strider

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Anonymous
17th Sep 2013 7:03pm
"Gaining nothing at all but losing everything she ever wanted for herself."
Powerful and tragic!
Powerful and tragic!

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