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Burden
They say,
He won’t give one
more than one can bare
yet the questions swhirl ‘round
can He not see,
or don’t He even care?
This weight is far too much to take
The ebbin’ of life’s soul is fadin’
Too many obstacules to overtake
This burden on my back’s ‘bout to break
Screamin’ to the heavens with ‘fainted’ calls
please help me for goodness sake, before I fall
never one to just lie down die
yet death seems so inviting in my hopeless eye
oh Jesus save me from myself I cry
it’s getting’ harder to believe happiness isn’t just a lie.
Don’t look me in my face
And stand there to declare what He won’t do
Becuz this burden is bearin’ ever more on my skin
Patience bout used up, at the very least runnin thin
They say He won’t give one more than one can bare?
Wonder how you’d feel if it felt to you like He didn’t care
Never the less, I'M HOLDING OUT hope,
that when I need him most
I'll turn, and find him standing alongside me here…
He won’t give one
more than one can bare
yet the questions swhirl ‘round
can He not see,
or don’t He even care?
This weight is far too much to take
The ebbin’ of life’s soul is fadin’
Too many obstacules to overtake
This burden on my back’s ‘bout to break
Screamin’ to the heavens with ‘fainted’ calls
please help me for goodness sake, before I fall
never one to just lie down die
yet death seems so inviting in my hopeless eye
oh Jesus save me from myself I cry
it’s getting’ harder to believe happiness isn’t just a lie.
Don’t look me in my face
And stand there to declare what He won’t do
Becuz this burden is bearin’ ever more on my skin
Patience bout used up, at the very least runnin thin
They say He won’t give one more than one can bare?
Wonder how you’d feel if it felt to you like He didn’t care
Never the less, I'M HOLDING OUT hope,
that when I need him most
I'll turn, and find him standing alongside me here…
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Re: Burden
16th Sep 2013 6:31pm
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16th Sep 2013 6:33pm
Thanks bro. Happy you liked n as always I'm deeply grateful
for your support :)
for your support :)
Re: Burden
16th Sep 2013 6:42pm
I have so many emotions running through me about this ink, Poet! Potent read to say the least! Can't put into words my feelings! Thanks for sharing! Xo
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16th Sep 2013 6:58pm
Well you need not try to articulate anymore than
what you have already... It's clear you honor me.
n that's more than I could ask for so it's all good! :)
Thank you my dear sweet Rain :)
what you have already... It's clear you honor me.
n that's more than I could ask for so it's all good! :)
Thank you my dear sweet Rain :)
Re: Burden
16th Sep 2013 6:55pm
I've felt this so many times and always find that just when I'm about to truly give up that's when I see Him.
Very strong words.
Very strong words.
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16th Sep 2013 7:01pm
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16th Sep 2013 8:49pm
"They say,
He won't give one
more than one can bare!"
Makes me so sad since it's not true ...
Strong and heartfelt write, my dear friend.
Chi
He won't give one
more than one can bare!"
Makes me so sad since it's not true ...
Strong and heartfelt write, my dear friend.
Chi
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Anonymous
16th Sep 2013 9:36pm
Omg PIKM, this is quite powerful, i don't think i've read quite like this in your other work. I like it very much :)
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16th Sep 2013 10:32pm
Well then, that tells me you haven't taken that journey thru my archives yet, becuz I have indeed done these types a few times lol... Look for "I Had" n also I believe u might like "Beauty Immortal" as always, I thank you my sweetness for your amazing comment n your support :)
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Anonymous
16th Sep 2013 10:53pm
"I am with you always..."
Whenever I feel overwhelmed by fear and doubt, I recall that story of how Peter began to sink in the seawaves during a storm. He cried out to be saved and Lord Jesus pulled him back up. It taught me to always look at The Omnipotent Hand which grasps mine, not the circumstances about me...
You have great strength, Poetikind.
Whenever I feel overwhelmed by fear and doubt, I recall that story of how Peter began to sink in the seawaves during a storm. He cried out to be saved and Lord Jesus pulled him back up. It taught me to always look at The Omnipotent Hand which grasps mine, not the circumstances about me...
You have great strength, Poetikind.
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16th Sep 2013 11:00pm
Aaaawwww how beautifully sweet of you my friend! Although I'm a lil confused, who's POETIKIND? lol
Juss jk... I realize u simply left out the M lol
Appreciate u always :)
Juss jk... I realize u simply left out the M lol
Appreciate u always :)
Re: Burden
17th Sep 2013 3:49pm
Ohmygoodness you just nailed it with this one, after rains piece this one also speaks to the turmoil I am in. loved it Poe luv ya bunches!
Red
Red
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18th Sep 2013 11:33am
Aaaaawwww sweetheart! Hope your heart is
feeling better now, luv ya back Red muah!
Thank you, grateful for your support always!
feeling better now, luv ya back Red muah!
Thank you, grateful for your support always!
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17th Sep 2013 5:46pm
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18th Sep 2013 7:09pm
I can't disagree with that assessment
Thank you my friend, appreciate ur support :)
Thank you my friend, appreciate ur support :)
Re: Burden
20th Sep 2013 5:56pm
A powerful piece that grabs your attention right away. Love the read as always. Thanks.
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20th Sep 2013 7:43pm
Thank u bro. Really happy you liked n truly appreciate your support as always :)