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A soul..sometimes
We have a soul at times
"advanced" in thoughts
metaphorically
symbolized
gestures
of civility
wrapped in a shroud of
finely weathered
intentions and consequences
with
the sisterhood of fates hindsite
lurking to cast hurricane
like responses and emotions
blurring the picture
of perceived safety
in a world of broken locks
and stolen faith
And yet through it all--
we still have a soul at times
"advanced" in thoughts
metaphorically
symbolized
gestures
of civility
wrapped in a shroud of
finely weathered
intentions and consequences
with
the sisterhood of fates hindsite
lurking to cast hurricane
like responses and emotions
blurring the picture
of perceived safety
in a world of broken locks
and stolen faith
And yet through it all--
we still have a soul at times
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Re: A soul..sometimes
13th Sep 2013 3:56pm
Everyone is writing this good stuff that reminds me of songs. In this case Sting's "Let Your Soul Be Your Pilot". If I remembered tv commercials like I do tunes, I would probably have myself committed for psychiatric help!
Can't help but notice you condition this by writing, "We have a soul at times".
Can't help but notice you condition this by writing, "We have a soul at times".
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re: Re: A soul..sometimes
13th Sep 2013 4:24pm
Slight little chuckle as your poetic expressions of poltical slants had a hand in inspiring this...at times we do..at times..by mere actions I wonder?
re: re: Re: A soul..sometimes
13th Sep 2013 6:13pm
Re: A soul..sometimes
13th Sep 2013 5:05pm
Beautifully crafted! I hear your message loud and clear doll!
One of your 'soul' searching scribes...
Love this Nik....xo
One of your 'soul' searching scribes...
Love this Nik....xo
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re: Re: A soul..sometimes
13th Sep 2013 5:18pm
Re: A soul..sometimes
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Re: A soul..sometimes
19th Sep 2013 2:24pm
Well I guess having/displaying a soul 'at times' is
far better than havin no soul huh?
A thought-full offering of ink my friend
Well done! :)
far better than havin no soul huh?
A thought-full offering of ink my friend
Well done! :)
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re: Re: A soul..sometimes
19th Sep 2013 2:27pm
Re: A soul..sometimes
19th Sep 2013 6:52pm
fantastic writing
but that line
in a world of broken locks and stolen faith
is brilliant!
sean
but that line
in a world of broken locks and stolen faith
is brilliant!
sean
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