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Re: Afterwards ...
10th Sep 2013 11:25am
Lmao this was funny to me
n the imagery so crisp
Yea, I'm wondering has the
'before' not been so amazing?
lol otherwise why question the closeness lol
n the imagery so crisp
Yea, I'm wondering has the
'before' not been so amazing?
lol otherwise why question the closeness lol
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re: Re: Afterwards ...
Thanks, Poe for the kind comment!
You don't necessarily have to be close for the BEFORE but for the leg above the hip AFTERWARDS you have to feel at least quite comfortable with each other. That does not mean the BEFORE needs an improvement :-).
You don't necessarily have to be close for the BEFORE but for the leg above the hip AFTERWARDS you have to feel at least quite comfortable with each other. That does not mean the BEFORE needs an improvement :-).
Re: Afterwards ...
10th Sep 2013 2:12pm
the question expands
the poem and opens
up many trains of
thought...nice
idea, Chi :)
the poem and opens
up many trains of
thought...nice
idea, Chi :)
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re: Re: Afterwards ...
10th Sep 2013 8:11pm
Your so poetic
answers very often
cry out for an
entry of their own - as poems.
Thank you so much for
dedicating so much
time to them.
answers very often
cry out for an
entry of their own - as poems.
Thank you so much for
dedicating so much
time to them.
Re: Afterwards ...
10th Sep 2013 7:47pm
Echo Dartford, and concur with your reply to Poetikmind. Sexually poignant, shortest "leg over" poem I have read!
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re: Re: Afterwards ...
I like the 'leg over' phrase,Solomon!
Let me think
about an even
shorter one :-).
Let me think
about an even
shorter one :-).
Re: Afterwards ...
Anonymous
10th Sep 2013 8:23pm
Chi,
So few words, yet still pushing the imagination ; ) Nice to be so caught up in the moment that you question later....
Enjoyed!
tornado
So few words, yet still pushing the imagination ; ) Nice to be so caught up in the moment that you question later....
Enjoyed!
tornado

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re: Re: Afterwards ...
10th Sep 2013 9:15pm
Glad to push your imagination, tornado! Sometimes the strangest thoughts come to your mind - afterwards. Thank you!
Re: Afterwards ...
Anonymous
10th Sep 2013 8:44pm
This could very well be the follow up on the last haiku...sensual word play, chi

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re: Re: Afterwards ...
10th Sep 2013 9:22pm
You're so right, Liz. It's really kind of a serial story, brooding over the questionableness of the plot. Thanks for following it!
Re: Afterwards ...
Anonymous
10th Sep 2013 9:55pm
Great title & much revealed in few words. Unique ink, Iris. Enjoyed. :-)
Peace
Carlene
Peace
Carlene

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re: Re: Afterwards ...
11th Sep 2013 7:19am
I tried to concentrate on the (for me) essential :-). Thank you for reading, my friend!
Re: Afterwards ...
11th Sep 2013 00:10am
re: Re: Afterwards ...
11th Sep 2013 7:21am
At least something :-). Nice 'afterwards' to everyone! Thanks for your kind comment!
Re: Afterwards ...
11th Sep 2013 1:25am
re: Re: Afterwards ...
Thank you for your honesty, Sincerly! I appreciate it and am not sure myself if there's a message at all. It's rather a description of a feeling at a particular time.
Re: Afterwards ...
11th Sep 2013 9:22pm
I'm always drawn to huge sentiments in small packages and this is one, that i truly enjoyed.
Nice job!
Nice job!
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re: Re: Afterwards ...
11th Sep 2013 9:42pm
And I enjoyed your stopping by! Thanks for the read and the very welcome and kind comment. Often there seems so much to say but some feelings make you fall silent.
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